*smiling weakly*

Oh my gosh!

I usually so not read one shots but this one is sooooooo good!

Please do more chapters with a cherry on top.

I really enjoyed that, awesome job! Loved it! P

This story was definately different, but it was really good. I liked the AU-ness of it. I just hope there will be more about the man and a way for her to be free. I wonder if the man will find out that his little vampire is still a live long after he caught her.

Erin

I loved it. This is probably the best vampire fanfic I've read. I wish you'd continue it, though. It's really good.

I totally like it

its really cool just a little sad that it is so short ;)

well, I like this story! it was interesting and no, I don't think there was too much description. I like it just the way it is!

you did a really good job!

sequel...

sequel sequel sequel please

OH...MY...WORD.

That was the most AMAZING story I have read so far.

The detail...wow...

Not to mention I LOVE vamp stories.

I could feel the emotion in the story.

Amazing story.

this is really good

hope u continue this as a muti chaptered story

Ah! I'm not into the whole vampire thing was REALLY good! Also, and I hardly say this of one shots, I think it would make a great multi-chaptered story. If you continue it or not, I love it :]

xoxo

You're from Puerto Rico? Cool so that means you probably wrote this while the small storm was passing right. My friend agree about the writing during rainy days but I wouldn't know. XD Awesome story, vampires and all.

Wow awesome story I loved it :), great job :).

I really enjoyed this! Awesome job ]