Reviews for Noel the Loner, Noel the Lover
TomoNeko chapter 6 . 10/26/2010
This is a really nice story. It has a lot of potential to become even better, and I can't wait to see it I love the idea of a half-fomor, and the love shared between a boy and his ego weapon~ Not to mention the little love interest of Nao's x3

I really can't wait to read what happens next to poor Noel, hopefully nothing too bad, so I hope you do continue to update the story. It's just too cute~!
Kaerru chapter 6 . 7/1/2010
I totally love this story! The part about Noel being a half-fomor was a brilliant idea, and all these bad people reflect the loser-creepers of Dunbarton. Besides, the egos really are cute, and if they were tangible I'd be hugging them and stuff all day long~ Can't wait for the next chapter
godofmadness43 chapter 6 . 4/1/2010
nice, you really portrayed Shaosu well i'm impressed
lightning-kun chapter 5 . 1/13/2010
Update soon please! There aren't many mabifics as awesome as yours.
godofmadness43 chapter 5 . 12/26/2009
awesome, plus i thought it was funny with Shaosu holding Nao's hand like that
Treeonice chapter 4 . 10/10/2009
D I love your story I didn't know what a militian was and I play the game XD ty for informing me FAVED AND ALERTED~
AnimeGirl chapter 3 . 9/27/2009
OMG THANKS!

Anyway sorry I haven't Reviewed in a long time. If I told you I forgot where the review button was would you believe me?

I LOVE YOUR STORY CONTINUE!

I still love Noal-chan. I mean he's shy, cute, a Loner, but he's so brave he dosen't even know.

Omg I'm such a dork -_-

MORE PLEASE! -
grvest chapter 4 . 8/24/2009
Dude this is freaking awesome, I can't wait to see what you do next.
godofmadness43 chapter 4 . 8/20/2009
nice, and i wonder something, there's going to be a Noel x Yuki in here i can bet
Soulbow109 chapter 3 . 7/25/2009
pretty good story i also think you are pretty good at how you make the characters hope you update soon
godofmadness43 chapter 3 . 6/4/2009
wow, i can smell a catfight comign up soon, now if Yuki was human, that would be interesting
AnimeGirl chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
Hi um...I've read this story so many times that now I'm begging for you to continue...

PLEASE MAKE MORE I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT NOEL-SAMMA DOSE! PLEASE!

*on the floor begging*

PLEASE MASTER OF MABI FANFIC'S! PLEASE CONTINUE!

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*clear's throat*

Ano...that was embarsing...

ANYWAY

I REALY like this story and hope you can continue...,,

*trying to pick up the little dignity I have...*

Thankyou

AnimeGirl
godofmadness43 chapter 2 . 2/6/2009
about time u updated, i wonder who the boy was at the end of the chap?
tatewaki2000 chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
not bad. Big fan of Mabinogi, and I think ur story has potential.

The dialogue is great, and couldn't hurt to put a bit more detail.

:P Hope u continue this fic.
godofmadness43 chapter 1 . 9/30/2008
Pretty good, though add more detail and description to it, i also play mabinogi too, my name is Shaosu if ur ever on.