Wow. Sad and powerful. Good job!

:'c. Aw. That's sad. He doesn't even have a name, he's just... the blond kid.

Aw

LOVED IT.

Tugs at my heart strings, so sad but true.

This is so sad and angsty for such a short drabble. Yet, you were able to sum up what Naruto's childhood was like, and how the neglect and abuse of one child among them was seen as acceptable and just "the norm". Your story brings up the same feelings I get every time I watch the first episode of Naruto, and really reminds me of the first endng credits, (I cry every time I see that, how lonely and neglected and ostracized he was, growing up). Nice job!

can I take this and add on to it giving full credit to you? Pm me please.

Poor Naruto

*sniff sniff sad face*
The way you wrote this...really tugs at the heart.

I love it.

Its sad but beautiful.

Written so well and a perfect portrayal of what Naruto's child was like.

Sad... but true, you got a good writing style (of what i have see) And you got great view point (that how it write?'point de vue'? )

There really is so much angst behind Naruto that you can't help but write about it. It's too hard not to. Very good, I have to say you're one of the best drabble authors I've read.

Short, to the point, and ridiculously deep.

The perfect one shot. Thumbs up!

Omg, that's just so sad, yet so sweet at the same time (

thanks for the fic! it was awesome, if melancholy..

That was a pretty damn cool fic!

Well, that was cheerful. (Sarcasm is amazing...)

Anyway, nice little angsty drabble there. :)