When are you going to make more chapter's

Maybe while they are about to temporarily taking the Duantless, Naruto uses his Sexy Jutsu on Gillete and his men

I don't like that Naruto was the one to beat jack because jack is even more unpredictable then Naruto and more experienced and more creative and another point I have to make is that from the movie you ruined some great scenes and replaced them with showing characters strengths and another problem is how some of the characters are just straight up out of character except for jack that was gold

I WANT TO IMAGINE AS THIS AS NARUTO SHIPPUDEN WHERE NARUTO CHARACTERS ARE FREAKIN STRONGER...

C'mon! You gotta update! PLEASE! This actually looks interesting and I wanna see what happens next! Pretty please! XD

write more

Story is amazing, keep it up

I want the chapter 7

Why! Why! Why haven't you updated?! I've been checking this story nearly everyday to see if there's been an update and there hasn't! Please don't stop writing! I'm dying to know what happens next! This fanfic is great!

When do you plan to update the story again it is amazing.

Oh man, I just know they've played this into having a great deal of trouble! Please update soon;)

This story seems good will you be updating soon

Found the first error in this fic:

"You've seen a ship with black sails, that's crewed by the … (I'm not going to use those words your just going to have to watch the movie), and captained by a man so evil that hell itself spat him back out?" Murtogg asked.

Seriously? You won't say, "That's crewed by the damned"? Why not..?

Damned isn't a curse word. Well.. not in that context. Its somewhat like the word, "Hell"

Ex: Go to 'hell', would be a curse.

'Hell' Is a bad place, would not.

The second is talking about the place, the first is not.

So, if damned is a curse in any context at all, then they curse in the bible. Alot.

If you say, "That man is damned to an afterlife in Hell.", then it isn't. Hey! I got'em both in one sentence.. Lol.

Later,

Eiji.

XD this is awsome great idea! i cant wait for the next chapter! and the idea about doing the 2nd and 3rd movies sounds like it would be fun to read keep up the awsome work!

This is good.