Aww, this is so sweet! I have absolutely fallen in love with your writing style, and the way you write the characters! You make them all so adorable (especially Kai)! And their relationships are so warm and sweet and just... gaah, you're awesome! Keep writing more Beyblade stories like this, please! :D

By the way, Kai and Miguel has now officially become one of my favourite pairings! :3

Great job! Also, I would love to see a picture of Gramps hitting himself with his Kendo stick XD.

oh how cute.

Wah radiating so much KaixMiguel mushiness

and the brotherly love you decribe Max & Kai with.

Hehhee.

The last paragraph was randomly funny.

I love the photo Max took.

:D

I'm such a fan, you're really good. I could never think of something like that

*wanne read more* x3

lol! so cute! x3 love it so much! and I LOVE THE LAST LINE! so funny :D lol poor gramps!

Aww, Maxie's so cute! LOL this entire fic is so cutesy! yay!

aww it's sweet. its always a brilliant storyline when a secret couple is found dating and Miguel and Kai together is one of the best out there.

can't believe i never read any of your fics before. well i aint making that mistake now, i'm getting through them... slowly lol... theres so many. Where to begin?

anyways, amazing writing from an equally amazing author who is clearly very talented in her field and loves what she does. lookng forward to seeing more in the future,

storm05

aww kawaii desu!

Haha I think you like putting as many people as possible in secret relationships! It would certainly seem to be a theme among your stories :D It is fun, you're right.

This is so sweet. Max definately needs the attention, and I like this view of him as Kai's adopted little brother. They are so different but they seem to work together well. At least Max doesn't get on Kai's nerves, except possibly when he's sugar-high ;P And of course everything with MxK in it tends to be adorable, though this one is particularly sweet. Great story!

So sweet!

Loved it!

aw... isnt that the MOST adorable thing ever...

its so cute...

dont we all love Miguel Kai stories?

(squeals loudly) OMG So much fluff and sweentess and GAH! I loved it, unbelievably cute and fluffy and sugary sweet! (giggles) Hope you'll write some more of these fluffy one shots they are so cute! (squeals again)

Anyway see you when you update! X3

Love ya lots

Blaze Queenie

That was the cutest. Little max is so cute. But feel sorry bout him mum. You should do a story with a big screaming match between kai and judy. That would be so cool. Tell her off. Please update soon. Love ur stories

I love your Miguel/Kai stories spiced up with some cute brotherly love between Kai and Max. This is great!