Reviews for Fox's Prey
Naruhina forever chapter 2 . 1/8/2016
This is not the kind of story I would normally go for but you wrote it so well that I could care less. The only thing that I think you should of had is while yes she would be scared of being the Fox's next victim Hunata always seems comfortable in naruto's presence so I think you should have incorporated that somehow and maybe that could have made her feel more fear because it would only confuse her during the chase. But like I said before this was a good story, one of my favorites
nicky's girl chapter 2 . 5/3/2014
damn i feel so wet ahhh
bad me: go call nicolas over here
good me: no wait for marrage
bad me: but u know 4 a fact he has a 10 inch gun and he is f ing strong hmmm remember u luv him and did i mention he wants us baby boy is lickin
good me: no...i...i...
bad me: HE IS HOT,FIRM AND LONG what else do u want
good me: DAMN IT WHERE IS MY PHONE
ghoast.cc chapter 2 . 12/25/2013
One more chapter!... what happens next!?
llazo4108822 chapter 2 . 11/22/2013
Ah I love this fanfic.
connor.carrera chapter 2 . 10/26/2013
I honestly think you should continue this fic. :)
futago-za07 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
...Naruto is a kreeper...and Neji...STOP COCKBLOCKING!
drizzelafterdawn chapter 2 . 10/1/2011
hey i enjoied reading it, this is a good story you know well,if it was your first attempt then tou were great man, really nice one and yea some how i dident find it funny but enjoyable odd nay? i dont know why but nice one.
mist chapter 2 . 9/29/2011
man i spend ages searching your fanfic and wow well i like it alot so yea nice dude.(i forgot the search bar hehe)
Urisen Yosei chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Eh... decent plot, except that Naruto has slept with so many people. And I also don't like the way Neji is acting, he has NO right to act like a caring older brother, not even in a fanfic. Considering he tried to kill her.
JSP chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
You, are a genius.
Towards the sun chapter 2 . 11/21/2010
You've done really good for a first timer lemon. Luve it!
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 2 . 5/5/2010
I love it please update your other stories.
kiuibi123 chapter 2 . 3/27/2010
awsum story!
AWESOME chapter 2 . 3/13/2010
MORE MOTHERFUCKER MORE!
Hyper-Blossom Z chapter 2 . 1/20/2010
hmm...GRATE TWO-SHOT!
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