| Reviews for Fox's Prey |
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Naruhina forever chapter 2 . 1/8/2016 This is not the kind of story I would normally go for but you wrote it so well that I could care less. The only thing that I think you should of had is while yes she would be scared of being the Fox's next victim Hunata always seems comfortable in naruto's presence so I think you should have incorporated that somehow and maybe that could have made her feel more fear because it would only confuse her during the chase. But like I said before this was a good story, one of my favorites |
nicky's girl chapter 2 . 5/3/2014 damn i feel so wet ahhh bad me: go call nicolas over here good me: no wait for marrage bad me: but u know 4 a fact he has a 10 inch gun and he is f ing strong hmmm remember u luv him and did i mention he wants us baby boy is lickin good me: no...i...i... bad me: HE IS HOT,FIRM AND LONG what else do u want good me: DAMN IT WHERE IS MY PHONE |
ghoast.cc chapter 2 . 12/25/2013 One more chapter!... what happens next!? |
llazo4108822 chapter 2 . 11/22/2013 Ah I love this fanfic. |
connor.carrera chapter 2 . 10/26/2013 I honestly think you should continue this fic. :) |
futago-za07 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013 ...Naruto is a kreeper...and Neji...STOP COCKBLOCKING! |
drizzelafterdawn chapter 2 . 10/1/2011 hey i enjoied reading it, this is a good story you know well,if it was your first attempt then tou were great man, really nice one and yea some how i dident find it funny but enjoyable odd nay? i dont know why but nice one. |
mist chapter 2 . 9/29/2011 man i spend ages searching your fanfic and wow well i like it alot so yea nice dude.(i forgot the search bar hehe) |
Urisen Yosei chapter 1 . 9/27/2011 Eh... decent plot, except that Naruto has slept with so many people. And I also don't like the way Neji is acting, he has NO right to act like a caring older brother, not even in a fanfic. Considering he tried to kill her. |
JSP chapter 1 . 4/14/2011 You, are a genius. |
Towards the sun chapter 2 . 11/21/2010 You've done really good for a first timer lemon. Luve it! |
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 2 . 5/5/2010 I love it please update your other stories. |
kiuibi123 chapter 2 . 3/27/2010 awsum story! |
AWESOME chapter 2 . 3/13/2010 MORE MOTHERFUCKER MORE! |
Hyper-Blossom Z chapter 2 . 1/20/2010 hmm...GRATE TWO-SHOT! |