This is one of the best YGO fanfics I've ever read and it goes straight to my favorites.
I know I'll be reading this again and again. Thank you, you brilliant author.

This was... amazing. I really don't know how else I could possibly describe it! The plot, the setting, the characters, the organization - it was all perfect, and it all worked together to craft the ideas of the fic.

I absolutely loved the parts where Bakura was sort of voicing over; his views on life were really interesting to read (I commend you on writing them so well, for one thing) and the Laddershipping was so efficiently introduced that it just added to the insanity factor rather than disgusting the reader. And the little details about Ryou being taken over - the burning, the mirror, the eye turning gray - were wonderfully depressing and eerie.

My favorite theme was probably the one of the monsters being everywhere there is darkness - the part with Kaiba was especially fascinating, and I find myself wondering who exactly tried to kill Yugi (though I believe I could hazard a guess...). When Yugi was running through the corridors at the end and seeing all those monsters, that coupled with Bakura's earlier revelation of children seeing the truth made me wonder if Yugi was sort of reverting to childhood out of fear.

The most lovely thing about this fic, in my opinion, is the fact that the reader can't be sure if it's mental or actually happening. And you certainly left us hanging way past the very end and pondering the reality of the events, and I love how efficiently you wrote this to make it so. This is an amazing story, and I think I'm going to have to read it many times over to soak up the awesomeness.

~ Keruth :)

Deliciusly dark! I loved it *purrs happily* Great job, I loved the way it was done ;) Especially Ryou's files ;) Oh and I adored the mirror idea, great thinking! You have an amazing talent ;)

This was absolutely fantastic. I'm definately a fan of the paranormal and abnormal. This was both mixed so beautifully and it made me feel all giddy. That's a good thing I swear. Bloody *pun intended* brilliant :D

that was SCARY good. bakura didn't make much sense at first, but that just added to the suspense. and the bit of seto/yugi was interesting too. i admire how you managed to tie that in to the main story. you are the best YGO author i've ever read! and it's hard to find good authors on . keep writing!

I loved this. It was very dark. Poor Ryou and Yugi. Bakura and Kaiba were caught in Zord's snare and now it is all ended.

Dude. That. Was. So. Freaking. AWESOME! The best I've read in a while, actually. Good job! (-:

T_T This was so... sad and creepy. I love it.

It's going in my favs. You're going in my favs XD

I really like the mental institution setting, I can relate to that, sadly.

Spooky spooky spooky!

This is so well written, the italic bits.. where yami bakura is talking... at first I thought you were quoting from something.. but you wrote that? Wow, just wow.

And the bleeding eye! that was my favourite part x)

bravo, bravo!

As usual, you took the impossible and made it happen. I loved it so much :D Hmmn, that pretty much sums it up, this whole crazy Pal/Laddershipping thing; "dating the devil". Yup, Zork's obviously the sexiest thing alive. I have no idea why the fandom likes Yami or Bakura or Kaiba, since they're so NORMAL.

HI Shadow,

Just wanted to let you know that I read and reviewed . You rock girl. This was spooky and scarry at the same time. I was hopping that Seto/Yugi was in the cards but you had other evil plans. I did enjoy tho. Horror is not my style but you wrote it well, so I read it.

Bye now, Darleneartist.

That was one of the most chilling, creepy, scare me down to my bones stories I have ever read! And part of that reason is because the darkness aspect of it is so real and true...Darkness really is everywhere. I haven't seen many fics with Zork; you did a very good job with this!

I have one thing to say:

DAMN!

(*will put more coherent review in email*)