Reviews for Unpredicted World
mumphie chapter 10 . 12/23/2019
Ah it's a shame you never completed this. The idea has merit. I'd like to know where you were going with it; how Evan's entrance into the tournament was, how he gets along with various characters, how bad Ron and his 'anyone not like me is evil', how Hermione behaves - does she tell the Americans how wrong they are about things? Does Even get to mean Padfoot, and have a lasting relationship with him? I hope, then, Padfood & Remus and Evan's parents get Dumbles spill and have everyone know who Evan really is? Will he try to kidnap him? I hope your plans keep Justin and Taylor alive and well! Will Evan learn about his parents and will he have a Potter family vault? So many questions...you really need to come back, or write a thought piece of what you were wanting to happen!
mumphie chapter 5 . 12/23/2019
Oh, I thought for sure they would go to the bank, Even would do a test for heritage since they think his parent might be magical, and then they would find out his real name. Maybe in the future?
Disney's Slytherin Princess chapter 10 . 11/5/2019
Wow what an awesome story! I hope you come back and finish some day!
Fanficaddict78 chapter 10 . 9/22/2019
This is awesome story..but too bad how many years no update..
blackthorngirl85 chapter 5 . 7/24/2019
jean I'm guessing is the american Hermione lol
NotYourDamsel chapter 10 . 7/14/2019
Aww it’s fine Miss Author you just take your time and sleep okay?
Guest chapter 10 . 10/22/2018
More chapters please. I hope he stays true to using his one leagal name. Like if people find out and call him Harry. I hope he keeps correcting them. And let's have Draco be his date. And be sure Ben never kisses Evan.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/22/2018
In ch 4 the class list I see no charms, history, herbology, science etc
YaoiLover328 chapter 10 . 10/1/2018
I really like your fanfiction, I hope you continue writing it. If you don't plan on continuing could I adopt your fanfiction?
CrazyInLoveWithNovels chapter 10 . 8/26/2018
This story is so good! Its one of the best stories I have read. Its been 7 years since you updated so I don't think there will be any more updates but I wanted you to know that this is one of the best fanfiction I have read.
LillyLovesManga chapter 4 . 7/2/2018
"How? I don't think Walmart has wands, Daddy. "

I choked on my water. lol
Guest chapter 10 . 11/25/2017
Vas a seguir publicando porque tu histotia me encanta!
aemilyl24 chapter 10 . 10/8/2017
This is such a fantastic story! I notice you haven't updated in years, though. I do hope you will continue to wrote this story. I love Evan and his family!
Roostertheking chapter 10 . 9/29/2017
Nice fic...do continue if u can..I enjoyed reading it...
IloveHeat chapter 10 . 6/7/2017
Dang. Just when it was getting exciting. Sorry you quit. This was great
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