I'm going to be rather honest with you. I like this story but I also don't like it. I don't like Addie or Matt either. I think that the way they have acted, especially after knowing about Alex, is not right at all. Addie's seriously jealous for no reason whatsoever, and she seems worse than Ron was. Addie is not a nice person for what she says to Lily. Lily has been tortured for years, of course she's going to have her mind warped into believing that she loves Alex. It's what happens after years of being manipulated. And when Addie acts the way she is, it makes me even more angry because a true friend wouldn't be so jealous over someone getting beaten up.

That being said, I like the story because of how interesting it is. You're also a good writer, even if some of the stuff in here gets me so angry I want to kill certain people in here.

Wow. I've been reading this for the past week and wow. It's anazing. Please update soon!

Flowers x

Hi! I've been reading your story, and I've been enjoying it. The only thing that's bothering me is that you've been doing this OoOoOoOoOoO thing instead of writing down the person who's talking. In this last chapter, I had no ides that it was Tyler talking, until I read your thing at the end. Other than that... YAY!

Awww... *tear, tear*

That was very good! Also, glad that there's another chappie up on this :) Keep it up!

As always, this is

~Funniefriend

Dude, I mostly post constructive criticism(under different names, so don't bother searching for me) but here, there is almost nothing to construct. So, I leave this story here. Good job with Alex Harper, who just ruined your story.

Good

My eyes are watering. I love it.

Pleases update soon!(: you write well!:D the plot is a bit confusing though\:

Wow. I'm so glad I finally got the chance to read it. I still love it as much as before, but it's still so sad. I want at least one person to have a happy ending. Please? Update soon. I want to hear more about Al and Addie. :D

oh my gosh! i realized in the chapters that you wrote when lily was in the hospital that you mentioned the plant in the corner a lot and i cant help but think that the plant reflects the health of the patients. did lily die? but if that is the case what is with the prophetic nightmares? what is in the black box? and why dont harry and albus realize that they are more alike then they could possibly admit? i absolutley love the complexity of your characters and the plot is wonderful even if it is a tad bit dramatic, but hey, thats what makes stories interesting. please update soon!

Wait...what? Did you just kill Lily? I hate when you use sarcasm through messaging. I never get that you were being sarcastic until after I've read the really sad thing. Oh...I really hope she's not dead. :(

It was great :D

There, I left a review. :/

Aw... I want an Al too. Addie's really lucky to have a guy like him. Great chapter as always. We missed you at the rest of the LOTR party. We got super tired right after you left. Anyway, amazing job again, and I can't wait until you update. I just hope you don't have to get sick again in order to do it. See you on Monday. Have a good rest of the weekend :D

Like you lots,

Ashley

...eh...

This is kinda addicting. I wanna stop ready it, because its horrible, but it is so good!