I loved it so much. But what I hate is that there was a cliff hanger. Please continue it. I know it's a little bit old but I want to know what happens after. If you could please finish it that would be amazing. Oh and please take your time because I don't want you to type something sloppy. That would be a disappointment to me. I wouldn't care if I waited a month or two or even three but if you can finish the story that would be great! :) :) :)

Gabster309

This was a good chapter and I think you portrayed Barkin really well but it was a bit of a surprise that you included him in the chapter. Of course, he can't be surprised to learn that David was from the future with how much craziness that happened because of Kim and Ron. But I also have to wonder what other minor/major character from the show will make an appearance.

Semper Fi

So Tondred gave them all the information they need to find the pieces of the gem and they use the tactic of divide and conquer so they could use the pieces to become powerful enough to fight him. Hmm... methinks this is a trap and all apart of his plan to get the power from the kids. The question is, how is he going to go about to get the powers from them?

Regardless, I am interested in seeing how his plan unfolds.

Semper Fi

Things have just gotten a lot more interesting for the group. Matt and Chyennes failed to hold the robots back and there seems to be a lot more about Fresa that no one knew about. I think I know the mystery behind her past but for now, I will wait and see how things turn out.

Semper Fi

I'm surprised that Tondred actually considered telling them his whole plan. I wonder if he isn't planning to spring some sort of trap on them. Or if telling them might somehow benefit him in some way.

I wonder what was on that disk? Chances are it might help both groups but I'll keep reading.

Semper Fi

Tondred being nearly invincible because of a magic gem actually explains a few things. Though I have to wonder about his nearly unlimited resources.

Good to see this continued and will read on the next chapter.

Semper Fi

KEEP GOING! WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!

lol. tondred is in a world of pain now. thats one way to say dont mess with my wife. o i love to see what ron is going to do to him now. if its anything like the invasion. tondred wont even stand a chance. will david and kayla get there in time? please update soon!

I demolished this fic in a few hours and I LOVE IT!

Please update soon *grins* I am putting this on alert and waiting semi patiently for the next installment!

Slightlyobsessedhaylz

I believe there is more to Fresa then revealed but I will wait to see what happens.

It's kind of surprising that Tondred was, in a sense, defeated, and now I think he might seriously consider running now he knows that Ron is capable of lot more with his Mystical Monkey Power, then first believed. But if he doesn't know now, he will soon.

I really would like to know more about Tondred, like his back-story, his reasons for doing what he is doing and how those children will help him to accomplish his objectives.

Semper Fi

It took a while but here I go.

The battle has been intense but seems to finally be letting up until Tondred showed up. He might finally get what he has came for.

Matt and Chyennes are safe and bonding a little more but as to what attacked them might be either a robot or another character that we know since not one word has been mentioned about that character for a while.

Personally I think that you could add some scenes with just Tondred working on his grand master plan but not say what it is or who else could be working with him, if someone else is working with him. Just a suggestion.

I will continue waiting for more.

Semper Fi

looks like tondred is in a world of pain. kim and shego better kick his butt and get their kids back. i bet tondred is the one who is attacking Matt and chyennes if so than he is dependly in trouble. UPDATE SOON!

I guess that was Tondred's plan. Send in waves of his robotic army until everyone was worn out, while getting the last of the children.

I like the cliffhanger at the end, since we don't know who it was that took Kayla by surprise. I wonder who it is? Guess I'll find out in due time.

It's good to finally see an update, sorry about your school problems.

Bonnie's idea had good and bad repercussions. Destroying the robots but made a new entrance for the robots to get in. Way to go, Bonnie! . . . note sarcasm.

The heroes getting injured is a good thing, since it shows they are not invincible. David just needs to heal in the Infirmary.

The problems keep on escalating for the group but something should eventually happen that would work in their favor. As for what, I'll wait for the next chapter.

I will continue to read as updates come.

Kaleo. It means broken mirror. Or Dementia.