I am enjoying this story for the second time. This was a great first chapter.

Thank you for a fun read.

I am enjoying your story. Please keep it up.

I love your pen name. It's awesome. Love the story too, thank you!

Hmm, I don't know why, but every time Edward's family save him from dying I always feel a little bit bad for him. I don't know why, but I always feel like they are taking away his freedom and his peace. Maybe its because I always thought of him as being forced into being what he is and never truly being happy in his vampire life, even with Bella. I always felt that if he was really given the choice he would choose death and leave everything else behind.

Good story though. I enjoyed every minute of it, even though Bella was in it ;) Hope you keep writing cause I can't wait to see what other stories you come up with. Excellent job.

There's nothing like finishing a story. Nice ending!

I'm happy with this last chapter. I'm not sure what I would like to see in a epilogue.

Great story!

An epi would be good, to really finish off the story! Like, how the family healed their problems, what of the Volturi's thoughts regarding Bella and what happened to Eleazar and Carmen.

Excellent chapter my dear!

CC

:D Thank you so much for updating! I thought you had given up on it but...YAY! I love this story! I don't know what to think right now though. Will they find a cure for Edward? Will the Volturi kill him, or will Edward end his own life? Will he live? Does he want to live? Should he be allowed to die to end his suffering, will his family force him to live, or will he fight for his life? Where the heck is Carlisle? Will Edward want to be with Bella now that she is everything he never wanted her to be?
Speaking of Bella, why did you have to include her *pouty face* I don't like Bella. Never have, probably never will, but it's your story. And it's a good story, even is she is in it.
Really, that's my only issue with this story, and it's a very tiny issue that I can easily ignore. You write beautifully and you have created an awesome story. Please update soon!
(P.s. If you like Bella, sorry, I didn't mean to offend. I was always more of an Edward person.)

Interesting chapter!

CC

I just re-read this story recently. I am so happy you updated. I could care less about any errors.

It's unusual to read Carmen and Eleazar as villains. That was a nice switch.

More please :D I totally just pimp'd it out on FB at the fanfic angst h00rs group. :D

I've been dying to ask. Why exactly is this called Jericho?

You are evil. FINISH.

great chapter!

you haven't updated in so long! i hope you update soon