really enjoyed both this and the previous story

I really really love this story the plot is very good your characterization is top notch and I love the interaction that naruto has with all the other characters I simply need more o& this amazing story an hope you will ever update again but I don’t have much hope that this story will be updated again because it has not been updated in more then 10 year

I hope you continue this story. I also wish to see the reaction on naruto "disappearance" by his precious people

Good way to keep it interesting. Who knows if Naruto and Itachi will e able to complete their current mission now. I'll wait to see what's next.

Fuck this is good. More would be quite appreciated!

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

Thanks for this even in its unfinished state its been a great bit of reading. Some of the most interesting takes I've seen in a while your induction of Naruto into the akatsuki was well laid out as you are correct he's only a disposable tool to pain and madara in this regard and the lack of rings allows for the training period until they are recovered which would've been interesting to see play out. My god though an itachi with hiraishin...thats a scary thought misdirection and the teleportation ability would be crazy as all hell would have also been interested to see if you decided to eliminate itachi's illness from the story definetly was interesting while it lasted cheers for the memories

would very much like to see this continued. I. enjoying get this rogue naruto and itachi team. plus I want to see how the damned story progresses! like naruto facing his old squad maybe? does he play the villain? regretful renegade? hateful traitor? start writing again so we can find out please.

Great story keep up the good work I have a request though can you make sure that the other jinchuriki like Yugito Nii ,Fuu,Utakata and Yagura don't die they have already lived a shitty life they don't deserve to die such a shitty death too

An interesting story, but it seems to have gotten off track at some point (I could be wrong)... the beginning of this story (the first installment) seemed to be based largely upon Naruto developing interpersonal relationships and that was pretty good, the slow path to redemption and happiness is usually a good read, but since then the story has changed significantly enough that it almost seems that someone else is writing it.

I find it less enjoyable.

Regardless, thanks for writing.

This series was good, to bad it was abandoned.

I'm begging for more to be added

Nooooooooo! I need more!

It's too bad the story was abandoned.