wow...you're right. that was wacky...ahaha..it cracked me up as well as surprised me in most parts.

you must continue!

Wow, I do love this story.

It made me laugh out loud more than once.

- Especially love the ending.

(blinks blankly at author's notes)

I don't know whether I should run in fear or laugh in mirthful glee at the prospect of more..