| Reviews for Master and Expert |
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  Guest chapter 13 . 7/10 Bro ur doing gud |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/10 Bruh ur like a pro writer no cap |
 Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 15 . 6/29/2019 I will say this I liked the combat over all. As far as the fighting I could give you some pointers. I make the offer as both a Beta reader and a life long martial artist.. |
| Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 8 . 4/22/2019 Well it's easier to wrap a true in a lie, so Oniheme believing it's a date would make sense |
| Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 3 . 3/24/2019 Over all I thought it was good the only real issue I have is the lack of "In Story Time" you are not allowing for the passage of time of day. As such it looks like a continuous scene and I don't think that was your intent, |
| Taliesin The Eternal Bard chapter 1 . 3/24/2019 Sometimes it's fun to let the story lead you! |
| Dee-Money chapter 18 . 3/18/2017 This was really good great job on this |
| Dee-Money chapter 9 . 3/16/2017 This story is really good I'm enjoying this alot |
| Guest chapter 18 . 1/1/2017 Very nice, I really enjoyed this. |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 18 . 7/1/2016 this was nice great story |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 17 . 7/1/2016 loved this chapter was funny |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 16 . 7/1/2016 this was nice that they told each other how they felt about each other |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 15 . 7/1/2016 this is cool can't wait for the romance |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 14 . 7/1/2016 i so hate gin the smug faced AHOLE |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 13 . 7/1/2016 this is cool hate that damn joker wannabee hope he dies crying like a baby |
