I was listening to demis songs and i just couldnt stop rewatching lala land its kinda stuck in my head now!

Please write more

Fun story.

Ah oh my god this story is so amazing! No it's wicked totally amazingly awesomeness! I love it so much! It tots its pure awesome! :D

LOVE it but can you PLEASE STOP making Shane say I Love You so much?

What I think is that this has to happen in real life in their right now situation xD

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY ?

I love your story! The plot was really good as was the way it was written! :) I didn't want it to end, but oh well. :D

Ok, this is retarded. I'm not being mean, and I don't want u 2 get offended or mad, but this story's...just...not very well written. srry...

TOO FAST! They get all mushy and, "I Loooooove you!" in da first 5 minutes! would u say "I luv u" to a guy so soon?

the ending is my favorite part. its so sweet. hes got a rose, and a loving smile. how adorable :)

your right. it is a sad world where nobody owns the jonasbrothers. other than paul&denise. god, they're SO lucky!

and danielle, she's lucky too.

but this is good. i love this story. :)

DONT YOU CHAPTER 13 SMILEY FACE ME. THIS WAS NOT A SMILEY FACE CHAPTER. THIS WAS A SAD FACE. SAD. FACE. DO YOU HEAR ME WOMAN! SAD FACE! ah!

sorry. I just, I can't believe it!

You should really think about getting yourself an experienced beta to review your stories for grammatical errors and the like before you post - little things like that can really distract a reader from the story -, but over all you've got a great start to your first fic. :)

Sure I love the idea. I loved the story. I read all kinds but I write Twilight Stories.