Reviews for Autumn Moon
Nom de Plume chapter 1 . 2/9/2014
I'm still trying to figure out why this story has so little reviews... Obviously the review-count does not reflect the quality.

Usually I don't bother reading stories that have no particular focus on a pairing but right from the get-go I could already tell that you had a great handling of not only the characters but the traditional Japanese culture as well. So, very nice work on the extra research & it's much appreciated as well. Even your writing style complements the light and sophisticated air this story seems to exude. If a writer can make a reader feel the atmosphere in the story... then you just know you've got something big churning here...

What really caught me though was how you portrayed Sakura. In most settings like these, usually the writer shows Sakura as someone who perfectly follows the role of the traditional Japanese woman and while the story can come out interesting... it leaves such a slow pace as both the reader and the characters just stare at one another in silence (really.. we can't expect Sasuke to be the talkative one here) but clearly, you took the opposite route and I really liked that. I liked it even more when you had her parents purposely left her out on their plans. You didn't have to even say it - Sakura is a girl who's stubborn and rebellious enough that even her 'strict' parents have to hide this from her. That is one of the marksmanship of a true writer, show not tell.

And Sasuke. Ahh, even though this is just a prologue (or first chapter?), I can already see you have his character pegged too. It would have been so very interesting to see how these two would have interacted but alas it seems you've been leading quite a busy life on your hands, hm? Nonetheless, I have an inkling feeling that you'll return someday... or maybe that's just the hope talking.
GoldenHorde chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Uh, no on this site does actual period AU pieces without mixing in too much fantasy and pre conceived perceptions about the era their trying to write about. But based on this first chapter, ''Autumn Moon" is fairly promising. (Though, I know nothing about the Edo period except that the Dutch were the few Westerners allowed to trade) The arranged marriage and the meeting of families is especially realistic.
Emmerlaus chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
Well written ! Im not adding ANY fanfic in my favorites but this one surely does merit its place there!

But Im hoping on Neji/Ten and Naru/Hina also... :)

Hope you write a other chapter of this wonderful fanfic!
batmanrox1319 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
my goodness why did you stop? This story is beautifully written and I love the traditional Japanese thing ya got goin here

Please update, what a shame it would be if you did finish this!
yubababa chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
hey nice but what happens next? i want to know update

i luv it

we...*o* amazed
anon chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
This is a fantastic story! I absolutely love the plot! You (and your sister) wrote an excellent chapter! I'm so excited about the next chapter! Please update soon!
seetheworld chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Very original, especially the use of the japanese terms.
Azaly chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Stories that have way-back Japan and other countries greatly interests me! This is really good! Continue, please!
Laura-chan chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Intriguing :D I like stories set in the Sengoku age and you show wide knowledge of Japanese customs. I'll be watching out for next chapter :D
Tessellations chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
dude! you totally pwn naruto. lol.

lovely story. it must be since i contributed. ;)

get working on that next chapter pronto!
whenifallxx chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
When I realized there wasn't a second chapter, I think I wanted to cry.

Aha. Just Kidding. Kind of.

(: Great story so far! I cannot wait to see more of this,

it all looks so promising. You write very well and you have the time period down to a T. Keep up the amazing work, please update soon!
pink-strawberries chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
cool story! love the AU period...unique and just brilliant for making a story out of it!

please update soon