Messes final smash isn't PK whatever that was-it should have been PK thunder while he yells it and the "er"for a long time with raining thunder bolts and the PK goo thing is PK flash

come back boyo

Let's have a tournament!
Good old-fashioned family fun!

This is one of the greatest fanfictions I read. I really wished that this wasn't over. There are three reasons how this could of end. 1. This person gave up. 2. They lost their account. 3. (The saddest reason) They died.
I hope you're still alive and will continue this story the next time you come on.

PUH-LEEZ update this! I've been waiting since 2011 for the next chapter, and am getting REALLY CLOSE to considering this fic D-E-A-D! The fights are written spectacularly, to the point that I don't even have try visualizing them, and the descriptions are so well done that I can practically feel the pain a character is going through. The only real problem I have is a few formatting issues that I can tell are more of a me thing rather than a bad writing thing. It would be such a huge shame mark this story as dead. I hope that I am wrong, but again, I am getting awfully close to the breaking point with this story. (P.S. I will continue to have this on my alerts, because I'm weird like that.:D)

You know that you've read a good fanfiction when you read a fanfiction that you want to create a fanfiction of.
This is one of those.

One of the best stories I have ever read. Its sad when I find that someone has just completely stopped doing the story, and even more when its a amazing story. Maybe if we are lucky we can get the end and not have such a great story go to waste.

pleas finish this story i read this buty in one week they have to end up to gether ive cryed over this so pleaz for the love of god finish it.

Tournament first, meeting later. Oh, and something about Lucario's spike.

U r awesome! Sheik and Lucario r my faves! I I've always thought the two of them would get along fairly well. Check out my fanfic "Lana of Smash Mansion".

The fight was good, but fighting in high heels? That sounds painfully undoable... Then again, it's not the most realistic setting on the first place.

The conversation Lucario and Sonic had was quite humorous. Overall, good job.

Great job again. I'm liking Lucario's personality so far.

Nice, start looks promising.

It makes me sad that this is over

this fic is amazing. thats all i can say. please make more. the roselia arc would be amazing. please update again soon.