Well, I've fallen in love with this fic already! I really hope you keep with this story and update soon, because you've done an awesome job at setting up the first chapter to draw the reader in and want more. What happens next? I'm excited to see, and I really hope you update! Wonderful first chapter with the right amount of suspense and great descriptions - please continue!

Cheers,
Shakaka

wow!

that is good keep writing!

that was really good