I like how you've only added Kamina back to the story and have not yet changed the story yet. However, I can't help but get the impression that you're rushing through your tale, maybe because you're dependent on knowing what people know of the show. I think you could make a really exciting angle if you tried to flush out the characters emotionally. But your representation of how Kamina would act is amazing when you focus on it.

Awww, a dead fic? This was actually turning out pretty for a fic with Kamina living.

If you ever do come back to writing, do continue this if you can.

Aww just 2 chapters? With Kamina being still alive, the rest of the series would be even more amazing, just one question though; Is this fic dead? Makes me sad if it is... lol

Nice AU fic, I liked how Kamina recovered to his usual self and it. And Nia, we love her, it would be funny to see future interactions with Kamina and Kamina teasing Simon about her. However it's been a long time, I suppose this is a dead fic. Nice try, though.

Amazing man, simply amazing. I LOVE well done fics where Kamina survives. Yours my good sir/ma'am, is the best I've read. You have plenty of detail to make things easy to visualize(As if the Show didn't already help with that XD)

In addition to that everyone is in character, something that ALWAYS helps with a good fic.

Already I like how Kamina being alive has altered things.

There is only one flaw with this fic.

It's been forever since it's been updated D: I hope you eventually decide to update this again. It has so much potential and I'd hate to see one of the best fic's I've read just die.

Very cute! I love your style! Awaiting the next chapter!

*jabs a finger in your direction*

The chapter name is not gay! It is absolutely perfect for Nia!

Write more, please!

great start so far! keep it up! kamina is awesome, and i can't wait to read more of this!

I liked this a lot. Kamina was totally in character. If he had lived it would have happened exactly like this! Nicely done.

Nice! Everyone's in character, and I really like the premise. Nicely done.

This is really good! I love your writing style. You did a really good job with getting the characters' personalities down. Keep up the great work!

Good story so far. I hope that later on you might add some elements from your Never Born fic to it.

This fanfic is so amazing, it makes me wiggle like a happy panda :D

I love your fanfic! :D

Pls pls continue it...i cant wait till the next chapter! :))

*whistles* been a while since you updated this. _ Glad you're not dead.

update soon, please!