Mr. Grumpy. Heh.

Ha!

Oh that was fun

CRACK FIC!

Well... At least partly. I love it. xD I have made the obvious discover that there are 17 chapters... But I decided to put my two cents in here... You wouldn't be coming back to finish this anytime soon would you? I usually don't read fics like this.. Something about the humor just throws the main plot to shit.. Though, I have found yours is a decent laugh.

Haha! Oh, I love this fic. You're OC is just hilarious and I love how you describe her world in colours when she's been knocked in the head. Also love her nicknames for people and the general craziness of it. Looking forward to more! :-)

NICE! ADD MORE PLEASE!

i wanna see what happens when Riddick figures out she is a Furyan!

Yay.

please update soon

thanks i didint know riddick was making a comeback and im a insane fan, been waiting this moment for years and it nearly fly past... shit... love your story too. you keep your charaters in their roles. oc is shit load of funny and sexuel tension is taesty (?) lets say sweet welcome. not to little nor to much(?). i liked the fact that your oc did not go looking for riddick it happens so many times and everytime i wonder why did the "heroine"(?) had to be in prisoned by tooms the merc. why did she go away from helion prime when she was told riddick was going to be in new mecca soon? talk about women without brains, it also happens to breaks the charater role of bad ass criminal with street smarts. i mean a criminal woul not use energy for nothing when shes gonna get what she want anyway.

It's from Princess Bride!

" tall, blond and creepy" - nice!

can't wait for the next part!

Slightly random but I like it! Reminds me of my 'ooh sparkly' issue! Lol

lOve it!...!