Wow, deep, full of sorrow and pain... and shock. When I read character death I thought "Susan or -caspian" so reading that Edmund was dead was a blow. Breathtaking in a literal literal sense

Love your style. Makes me feel... a lot

Wow. That was really intense. It was incredible, though. Very well written, all the characters were very well done.

OMFG. Fucking hell. WOW. God, I'm incoherent. That was absolutely incredible, and so sad. Nearly brought me to tears, and that's saying something considering the mood I've been in today.

Beautiful.

Oh, loved it. Well written, not at all over done, and true to the characters. Good job! :)

This was so sad.

BUT i enjoyed your writing style! Definitely sophistacated and put the readers in the story.

I must say it's sad how it ended though ):