You created a beautiful story! XD

Okay, I know this is a cross over and what not and that by the end the whole thing (last least in other stories) is exposed but I full heartedly believe that Shepard would not EVER be this careless. I believe he would not even joke about Atlantis or anything else because of the possible threat to Atlantis. Other then that I am really glad that you have the whole story really balanced, at least for me.

that's not how anything works

That was quite a good tale. You are good with the suspense and cliffhangers. Thanks for writing.

I just discovered this story and thought it was great. Thank you.

Let me tell you, since this is the first time that I read an NCIS and SGA crossover, I really enjoyed. Keep up the good work.

Great story! Really enyoyed it!

I really enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Fabulous story, not my first time reading it! Thanks for sharing!

Brilliant. Going to read the sequel next. I hope it'll have a bit more Abby in it. It really had me laughing when you wrote those two hit it off.

Great story so far. That is just so in character for Ronon to keep replying to each question with classified.

Ok so I realllllllllly want to read one of these where ncis gets correctly chewed the fuck out for doing this. Just once, they literally broke a shit ton of laws and will not even care.

That's not Gibbs. He doesn't lose his cool that easily. He can, yes. But not immediately.

And I would think the SGA team would have contacted the DIRECTOR first.

A great melding of the two shows.

Very good story. Tiny quibble, the SGC (just in general) would be foolish not to use the expertise of Mossad, they have by far the best track record of any national intelligence service.