Damn thing is nearly 10 years old but it's SO GOOD. Your pacing, characterizations, dialogue, insights - they are all so damn good. I never get tired of reading and enjoying this. Thank you for sharing with the Fandom. :)

I enjoyed this ... there was a lot of vagueness, but my familiarity with the characters drew it altogether easily. I wish the end had been just a bit more prolonged. You have this great build up, and this sort of inadvertent, almost desperate confession. Which I think could have gone just a bit further into expressing ... and even more, accepting. Regardless. I thought this is one of the better snippets I've read-more chapter 2, as it really explored that transition from friend to intimacy. ~JSM

Oh man that ending was great. Of course now, he could be missing a limb and the answer would still be to do that thing asap.

Darling, it's been YEARS and you're work still holds up. You're an amazing writer - the pacing, tone, word-voice; characterizations, plot, dialogue. And goodness but this is funny and sexy and so great. 3 Thank you for your writing!

Hahahaha! This was quite fun and cute, really! I enjoyed it! I'm going to stalk your stories for a while. Thank you so much for the marvelous reading!

Awesome. I really enjoyed this two-shot.

The 12 year old in me can't help but laugh.

Oh my me! That was one of the most hillarious ending I've read yet! NaruSaku forever!

terribly cuuuuuute! among the few narusaku i've read i can already tell i very much preffer the way these two interact in your fanfics. wonderfull! keep it up:D !

X) Good call Naruto. Good call.

Loved it!

Really well-written and nice flow. I don't know why, but it left me with sort of an odd feeling...

Loved it!

I love you, and I love this. Please never stop. EVER.

this could be canon. their portrayals here are so spot-on, Sakura being dominant and the last line is so incredibly...Naruto-ish. really enjoyable read!