I loved it. The only thing that I'm curious about is the second guy. In the episode there were two guys in the bank, the guy in this story and the bank manager or official person. I liked how this played, but I'd like to know if they caught the second guy in this version. My guess would still be yes, they would still rescue the wife after this, and she would tell them about the second guy, and then Shawn would figure it out. ... Never mind I think I just answered my own sort-of question.
Loved it.

I love this whole thing! Then ending as spectacular, do you think you're going to add another chapter? I would love it if you continued this!

Aww~ That Ending Was Nice. I Mean Shawn Being Completely Serious: That's A Nice Change.

& I Love How Shawn Still Asks About The Old Man Boobie Question. Really Funny! X3

Love this! Great story!

good job on the story, you really had me going on the 'shawn got shot' angle. I wonder, is there going to be a second chapter? Because this first one was magnificent.

And by the way, thank you sir! Now, because of your brilliant fact-finding skills I know Luntz's first name! Huzzah! Nay, a thousand Huzzahs to you! I'll probably thank you again in the next chapter of my story, for which I desperately needed Luntz's first name.

Again, good job, and thank you.

luved it