Okay now I am sure of the Hellsing influence.
The attack Robyn uses is the one Walter uses and Marcus von Rosenberg is modelled, maybe even is Alucard. The ablities, outfit and restriction system fits. Other than that. Great chapter though you have so many so-called "false Friends" within it is a shame (Where you have they're is should be their and so on). Your (and not you're as you so often have)grammar is not too bad and it makes for an interesting read, so overall not bad.

Please keep up the wonderful stories.

I like it!

Awesome!

I am loving this story almost as much as I did Two Galaxies' Saga.

...EH? okay, so Marcus is kinda a mix between Alucard and Alexander Anderson...
and now Robyn is Walter?
you really like Hellsing don't you?

...was Marcus inspired by Alucard?

Oooh! I so love the Dark Eldar! Homunculus are so much one of the best charecters in 40k! Ehahahahahaah!

- D.P

A very good read, absolutely riveting, and the descriptions were so in depth I could almost picture them myself

(I am not a Warhammer/ Star Wars fanatic, so much of the terminology meant little to me.) Despite this, you still

conveyed a brilliant story.

Fantastic story :D

The dying and coming back to life that keeps occurring in this series sort of dissipates the tension, but the plot moves smoothly nonetheless :)

minor point: I think you accidently wrote "Gabriel replied," instead of "Joseph" when the Admiral was going to visit the survivors in the final chapter XD

am looking forward to reading the sequel :)

Good stories, keep writing

awesome. Love your work, as always.

A very nice chapter for the epilogue, though of course it is clear that this was an interlude leading up to the Sith Wars. Personally, I cannot wait for the first chapter of those and the thought of Alana now working with an Inquisition team... It makes me wonder, who'll you pair her up with. Oh yes, please add Jagged Fel to the stories. Him and Jaina are just great. I liked your JosephxRobyn moment though. I think you should expand it a bit.

Though this chapter eas great, there were far more spelling mistakes in it than usual, which marred the chapter a bit.

Still a merry christmas and a happy new year to you though, and thank you for this nice story.

P.S.: I'd really like an update on the The Thirteenth though. (sorry for being so rude)

Great story, thanks for posting.

Hopefully the next book will be faster to update, but i can't bregrudge such works of art for taking time. Still, I hope the next book is soon to come!

Only critique I have, is that there wasn't enough Dark Troopers. And I'm not kidding, they're the Space marines of SW.