A really great story.

I keep imagining the brunette auditor as Summer Glau... lol

I'm liking the code for the secure storage. A hint to Sarah's birth date perhaps? I am a little bias as the code (assuming it's a birth date) is 3 years off of mine.

Fantastic story. Hope you return to writing

Wow! That was a very strong finish. I really couldn't see it but you masterfully pulled it off. Thank you.

Snap! With your Sarah and the tone of the story, I can't see Chuck and Sarah getting together. In fact with the pressure from an unyielding Casey and the devotion to the job, I think they should break up. I'm sort of curious how or if there is some resolution to that so onward I read ;)

Overall that was a really. Ice job. One thing I never mentioned was how much I liked the way you wrote the Maroon Shirts. Their scenes had just a slightly skewed sense of reality.

Yes! I love that you payed off that best in class rollover protection. I knew it was coming as soon as the got in Ellies car. Good payoff there. That's something that you do really well, you pay off small bits of info.

I'm glad things settled a bit. The writing is good, but there was so much bad going on that I ended up skimming some stuff. Tough read.

Whew, that chapter was needed badly. The angst is unrelenting and it's tiring me out.

That kinda felt unnecessary. I don't have a problem with it, I just felt like everything you were trying to get across in this chapter you had already addressed just as effectively in other parts of this story. It just kinda felt lime edgy for the sake of it.

The writing is good, but you really don't have the team together much in this series. I find it takes me out of every changing viewpoint for the first few minutes of reading because I keep waiting for the main three Characters to interact and it's not really happening.

This was an awesome fic, not only this one but the prequels as well. You are one of the best writers I have come across in this fandom. Your fics feel totally like episodes of the show, if not in tone at least in pacing and structure. The only critical thing I can add is that the darker cynical tone of the spyworld, the colder Sarah and the relatively bland heroics of Chuck are not my cup of tea. I would prefer those be closer to the show, but that's just me. Your dark take on Caseys doesn'the help maters either. In any case you wrote some awesome fics, thanks for sharing them with us.

Holy fuck. I don't know if I can take any more. This is so good and so real and it just fucking kills me. Holy shit man. If the Chuck story truly existed in our world, I think it would mirror this. Goddamn. So good. So so good. Please understand if I never read more of this. I don't know if my heart can take it.

oh, how I want Sarah to catch these maroon shirts trying to seduce Chuck. I wonder what her reaction would be.