*7 years

This person hasn't updated in 12 yrs! Great StarClan!

OMG the names friggid suck.
They dunno what Gays are
They dunno what dragons are
Heck, I don't even think they know what RAINBOWS are

Omg. This Trollfic is hilarious. DIid a 7year old write itt?

chaotic

I am now reminded of “tonight we strike” :p

Wow I like how Moonpaw is so wise! :) I support you

Hey this was actually pretty good! Add oil:)

Sins:

Deathstar somehow has the ability to control the lighting, since his "evilness" made it dark. Jeez.

Cats kiss "so much". ((Sigh))

Multiple typos.

Random exclamation marks!

Ancient is gay and mormon?

Gaysparkle is now known as "Gaysparkel"

Okay, so EVERYONE likes Gaysparkle? Damn.

Cats have dates in this Clan.

What the hell is a "gallifrey"?

Deathstar STILL has rainbow eyes! GOD DAMN IT!

Also, Ancient is supposed to be this really spooky/professional cat, right? He sucks at impressing cats.

These weird nicknames confuse me to another level.

Ancient admits to not knowing why he likes Gaysparkle and suggests they're insane. '

'and got up in Gaysparkle's face.' ((Sighs))

Deathstar thinks that Ancient might be 'onto something'. Holy crap, how dumb is this cat?

I can't even tell who is who and what is happening. Phantom is Lilyblossom? Ancient is Lilyblossom? Lilyblossom just popped out of nowhere? What the hell?!

Phantom tries to convince Deathstar to become mates with him again. Like, out of nowhere!

Gaysparkle says "Why are so many people trying to break us up today?" and no one but Ancient has tried. Also, he's totally cool his boyfriend might leave him. Nice.

Phantom appears. Literally eight seconds later, he's leaving. 5 sins.

Happiness is now spelled "happyness".

So, Phantom and Ancient are the same person? Wow.

Deathstar also suddenly decides he'll cheat on his salty boyfriend.

Having a split personality means you have MULTIPLE. And at least more than two. So, I'm pretty sure the author said, "Screw it."

I was far too lazy to finish the rest of this, but as I was about to wrap it up, I saw "Daddy Phantom".
I officially want to kill myself. 1000,000,000 sins.

Final sin count: 1000,000,000,000,000,000 sins.

Funny. Moonpaw is a Mary Sue. Although I love the prophecy.

Moonpaw is a Mary Sue.

Unrealistic setting and names, but nice writing. A bit fast paced and to many exclamation marks! Moonpaw is a slight Mary Sue. Nice writing style though.

Nothing

Can I be the 666th review? Also: this is beautiful

(/s)

Yeah, you're getting sued by George Lucas/Disney.

I thought their mother (atrociously named) Daydreamheart