Reading some of these chapters made it feel like my heart had shriveled up and died

I cried. :p
I am such a sap.

I can just imagine Soul's horror as she takes out the book. That one, slow motion moment of "OH FUUUUUUU-".

By the way, I'll be surprised if he survives insulting Crona's art. Seriously.

U took this from an episode, why didn't u do something AWESOME? Not just re-wright an epi? (epi episode, pronousiation: eh-pee)

YESSS CHRONAxMAKA!

You really captured Chrona well.

god ginki your a fucking loser you know right you shit head if the auroth wants to that to crona he can motherfucker ginki kill yourself

Fuck you, that was beautiful. I'm fucking crying now. Fuck.

this was really sad...good job though but the chapter was good/sad, i almost cried...

This is great! I really love it!

lov it! ur and awesome writer!

omg this is the saddest thing i've ever read...omg...i can't stop crying! good job~!

This was too cute for words 3

I love your writing so much, and I agree, Ohkubo needs to stop doing this. Does he enjoy taunting us? I can imagine he probably does. The man knows how to keep his readers :/

Baww, Chrona, you are so adorable and passive. I seem to fall for passive characters without fail.

It probably is better to have the happy at the end after all the angst. It provides a nice balance.

Oh my god. That last one is so sad! D:

I like the way her responses match up with what Chrona said, too. It makes it sort of bitter-sweet. You handle Chrona's point of view really nicely with this whole... calm/unsure/spazzy/confused awesome that works so well.

Keep writing!