Reviews for Firsts |
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CSIbabexo92 chapter 5 . 11/28/2008 aw...this story is so cute..I cant believe I just found it. I loved that chapter. great story |
sillym3 chapter 5 . 10/15/2008 nice favourite are the first two chapters. thx 4 sharing;) |
cwinky503 chapter 5 . 10/6/2008 Cute story. I really like it. I hope you will update soon! |
Prairie24 chapter 5 . 10/6/2008 Keep going! Great story. |
sixytplus chapter 5 . 10/6/2008 I .just love these stories I hope there are a lot more firsts |
Moochiecat chapter 5 . 10/6/2008 Hurrah, a lovely update! Hopefully, more firsts coming? Because they're "loverly firstlys," LOL! |
Famous4it chapter 1 . 10/6/2008 I fell in love with this story after reading just the first sentence. |
sarapals with past50 chapter 5 . 10/5/2008 Wonderful story! And you have the perfect description of how Sara and Gil finally got together! Very very good! Thanks for writing this. |
Spratjmk chapter 5 . 10/5/2008 That was great |
GSRCSILVR25 chapter 4 . 9/19/2008 just read these four chapters. love it! is there more? |
alietajoh chapter 4 . 9/17/2008 So will there be more, I notice that at the end of each chapter you put FIN. I like to read more, its good. |
PurplePopple chapter 4 . 9/16/2008 I don't know why you don't have more reviews because your work is lovely. I adored all the chapters in this story. It was well written, free of any annoying and distracting grammatical and spelling errors. It felt spot on in terms of characterization. I could hear their voices as I read along. You pull at the emotions in a way that adds another layer, another dimension to the story. You're one of my favorite authors and this work goes to demonstrate why. |
LouHooper chapter 4 . 9/16/2008 I'll never get tired of this kind of stories, GSR beginnings. I love them and their history. Great job, very sweet and sensitive with Sara's issues. |
Spratjmk chapter 4 . 9/16/2008 Another good one |
SirBarth chapter 4 . 9/16/2008 Very very intense... wow |