Reviews for Firsts
CSIbabexo92 chapter 5 . 11/28/2008
aw...this story is so cute..I cant believe I just found it. I loved that chapter. great story
sillym3 chapter 5 . 10/15/2008
nice favourite are the first two chapters. thx 4 sharing;)
cwinky503 chapter 5 . 10/6/2008
Cute story. I really like it. I hope you will update soon!
Prairie24 chapter 5 . 10/6/2008
Keep going! Great story.
sixytplus chapter 5 . 10/6/2008
I .just love these stories I hope there are a lot more firsts
Moochiecat chapter 5 . 10/6/2008
Hurrah, a lovely update! Hopefully, more firsts coming? Because they're "loverly firstlys," LOL!
Famous4it chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
I fell in love with this story after reading just the first sentence.
sarapals with past50 chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
Wonderful story! And you have the perfect description of how Sara and Gil finally got together! Very very good! Thanks for writing this.
Spratjmk chapter 5 . 10/5/2008
That was great
GSRCSILVR25 chapter 4 . 9/19/2008
just read these four chapters. love it! is there more?
alietajoh chapter 4 . 9/17/2008
So will there be more, I notice that at the end of each chapter you put FIN. I like to read more, its good.
PurplePopple chapter 4 . 9/16/2008
I don't know why you don't have more reviews because your work is lovely. I adored all the chapters in this story. It was well written, free of any annoying and distracting grammatical and spelling errors. It felt spot on in terms of characterization. I could hear their voices as I read along. You pull at the emotions in a way that adds another layer, another dimension to the story. You're one of my favorite authors and this work goes to demonstrate why.
LouHooper chapter 4 . 9/16/2008
I'll never get tired of this kind of stories, GSR beginnings. I love them and their history. Great job, very sweet and sensitive with Sara's issues.
Spratjmk chapter 4 . 9/16/2008
Another good one
SirBarth chapter 4 . 9/16/2008
Very very intense... wow
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