OMG please come back and update... I am in love... In love I tell yea...

MY HEART AND THIS WILL NEVER CONTINUE GOD DAMN IT!

Is kumaaaa

You haven't updated for a while so I guess this story is discontinued. That's a shame, 'cuz I like it a lot. Well, maybe I'll read some others stories of you.

I'm sad that you won't be continuing the story; it is really good so far but that is ok. I look forward to future stories.

Very good chapter, i like it and it's Bartholomew Kuma!

This is great i hope you update soon.

It was Kuma

Zoro's boggart was Bartholamew Kuma, right?

You guessed Robin, Zoro, Chopper and Franky wrong. Though I think that Robin would be flattered to be thought of as so young; she's 28, Franky is 34 and Chopper is 15. You didn't get so far off with Zoro though, he's 19.(This is all assuming that this story takes place before the timeskip.).

Kuma, and please update soon

I love everything except for the yaoi. Good fic!:)

i loved it so much, but im super sad its not still going! ah well imagination fuel!

Oh dear. I reviewed the first chapter without reading the second, so I gave you info about the age of the Straw Hats uselessly. Sorry for bothering you.
So far I am liking the way you write, and the story itself, not too cliché and all. I know it's been years since the last update though, I am wondering if you'll ever come back to it?

Hello,
Regarding the age of the Straw Hats you gave at the beginning, I have just watched the movie "Z" and in it Robin gets de-aged to about 18 years old. The person who de-aged her says her power works by taking off chunks of twelve years, so Robin would be about 30 years old actually. Also, One Piece wiki says Franky is 36.
Hope that was helpful.