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Good ppw

From the 29 chapters you uploaded so far, the ones I liked most are 'love' and 'comfort'.

Does that make me a fan of fluffy stories? Yeah, I suppose... damn.

Does that make you a good author? Yeah, since I liked the other 27 stories as well.

Good writing.

...WHAT JUST HAPPENED?

That was just 100% sweetness. I know both Sarah and Derek are portrayed as Mr. and Mrs. Macho, but that was touching in their own little way.

That was pure cuteness right there. Unfortunetly, I can't just tell my siblings is wrong; they yell at me and run off.

" “We all die for you.” Derek’s words came to the forefront of his mind and he nodded to himself, sighing. His mother died for him as surely as others had…she was just still around to show the scars and wounds and hang the price over his head. "

It's really wonderful to come across something that just leaps out at you. It's like something you've known all along and are just barely having that moment of epiphany when you first put it all together. It's quite the experience.

nice chapter, if I was in that situation I would be so utterly confused :P

Very nice.

Simple but eloquent.

Makokam out.

Boy, he really does walk a tight rope. I wonder how often, just waking, he has unknowingly called her Cameron. I wonder what Allison thinks. Her understanding would be very understandable. But what else does she feel?

Awesome chapter.

It seems that no matter where he lands his fate will chase, catch up and overtake him anywhere, anytime.

Very nice.

Nice chapters, for #27 I can't figure out who the "her" is, my best guess is Sarah because of the green eye thing.