Fue la mejor historia te felicito, eres excelente escritor espero tus siguiente obras.

I liked the end!

There wasnt even a flinch at the mention of all those families being butchered. Nor was it necessary to have madara read his memories and kill them.

If I remember right he could only torture the info out of them and do enough damage to damage his mind and memory but mind reading wasnt a thing.

Damned annoying needles decision by the author.

Uber tier piss off with the uchiha families being wiped out anyway.

to leave in which Team 9 discovered and removed. Selen, Konohamaru, and Hanabi showed themselves as well manured children though

I almost cried at "well manured children "

those who follow the rules are trash but those who abandon thier comrads are worse then trash.

It's those who don't follow the rules. It's been repeated wrong repeatedly though this is looking after the authors dropped this. Just commenting for other readers who may get the mistake stuck in there head rereading repeatedly.

Repeatedly ankos been portrayed as a slut but especially so in this chapter and it's a piss off.

Again the reason I hate clones being used in relationships and sex in particular was explained in this chapter yet they were still used with his wives.

Clones are attempted copies of themselves and while you get the memories you're just remember someone screwing your wife not experiencing it. Those copies aren't always perfect and can even be lacking twisted or enhanced in personality quirks or emotions.

Not cool getting a memory of your clone trying to encourage your wife into saying hes giving her the best shes ever had as he tries to one up his original.

I guess hanabi wont be marrying him since he seems to be the match up for selene.

I dont want to comment more than this on the inuyasha bit or the target he just placed on kiba head for a sword rather than the mist nin swords.

Still sad about no hinata..

This reminds me. I noticed there was nothing on him befriending ten ten this time around but I just remembered this means he didnt have the picture if her mother to give to her again. On top of that he had his book collection on shelves in his home so I'm wondering what book his daughter had since he lost them in the reset too.

As a side note I'm seriously bummed about him not being with hinata. Shes a sweet heart who goes through a bunch as well. I just hope there isnt a pairing with kiba. It bugs me when shes paired with others but especially kiba or sasuke.

What happened to all the damn clones.

Couldve had one warp to and bring the hokage. Reset and prep to deal with it in advance. He had options but died instead.

Also that sister comment about shizune and kissing a clone was.. how is she like a clone. Its obvious hes written out rin and her though with their "screen time" as it were and I doubt it'll change second time around. Assuming he doesnt end up letting his worries get to him and doesnt decide to avoid people ad much as he can while still helping.

And in 1 day with little time together shes blushing over iruka. Really...

That's annoying but I saw it coming as soon as she mentioned that because they work too well together 8t would be a good idea to split up.

Instead of being together as a couple the author will likely put her iruka despite everything she went through with him.

Working together well is what you're supposed to want. The point is survival, but no they work too well together so let's lower their survival odds and start from scratch instead of working someone in.

What a massive let down. "Little brother and cant were each other as an item". Fricken really? Someone like you who knows you well, always there for you, helped change your life for the better 180 and at such a young age when shes supposed to start finding guys more appealing she cant see him as anything but a little brother and they split up for such a weak reason so easily.

I'm quite annoyed.

Okay I didnt even finish this chapter yet but the trade of doesnt sound worth it at first glance. Yeah he can travel through time but if he still cant change anything then he can only learn. Which is nice in itself but he could do so much more with kuramas chakra and help in the war and later.

Him not being able to use it to fight anymore isnt worth it.

He was also told hed be obtaining multiple bloodline like abilities. The one and only thing listed is his Jumping portal like ability. Everything else was knowledge and skills on fighting and survival.

He did get training from his parents which is very good but again the kyuubis power allowed him to face those uber threats and save everyone's asses during the war.

He hasnt obtained multiple bloodlines and hes been nerfed. I'm confused on how hes supposed to benefit and come through in the end.

I assume when this story was written and dropped the naruto series hadn't been written or shown that far on TV. I dont feel like checking though.

So what does Helen's death do for history? Is there really a reason he couldn't bring her with him besides just because?

Also I see kyuubi got screwed over. They were supposed to be friends in the future.

Finally I dont get why no talk whatsoever came up about David going with naruto back home to a world without the Paladino's so he and his family would be safe(r).

really bbb you couldn't think of anything else to use for jumping lol how original I would've use something like tjp for time jumping power Bbb litteraly has no acranems that make sense