PLEASE UPDATE!

Grrr nooooo you cant leave me hanging like that update! RAWWWRRRR!

Ooohhh!I'm looking forward to reading more!

fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu a cliffhanger
But i love you all the same, loving the story :D

i find it hard to describe in words what i just read but i will try:
OOOOOMMMMMGGGGG! THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING AND JAW DROPPING SCENE EVER!
i hope this does it justice.

Aww, why'd you stop here?
It was just getting good too xD

Oops, there seems to be some kind of mistake here, the whole chapter is underlined!
Not fun to read :\

Huh, wow! Cloud sure took to Angeal fast xD

Please please PLEASE update this! I love how it's been going and I know you haven't updated it in a long time but this story is to good not to finish! 3

Dude, you seriously just stopped there and haven't continued... Not cool bro, not cool. -.-''

omfg omfg cyyyyuuuuuuuute

Well… I don’t know if you’re planning to come back to this work, but I think it is o-kay. On the plus side, I didn’t notice any spelling mistakes and the Angeal/Cloud pairing is certainly unusual. However, I’m unsure of the pacing. It appears too fast and is gaping substance. The situation is sort of treading into a one-night stand area since Angeal and Cloud only know each other through their mutual friend Zack. The few encounters they’ve had so far largely consist of eager lusting. I think you could’ve broadened the friendship phase before passing over to the romantic stage.

Angeal and Cloud are so cute together! I'm already hooked on the story now! :D

update update update update please...don't leave this story where it is please this is such a catching story and it'd be a waste to leave it where it is

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