Really looking to reading the next segment

wonerful story. excellent au writing. eagerly await the wedding, babies and the end of wraithdom.

I love how you've written this. I am inspired by the depth of this story, the intriguing plot lines, and the struggles of the characters. This is truly an amazing piece of work.

I was a little disconcerted that Sheppard lost (possibly temporarily) a part of himself that we all love, but I love the way you are exploring his character. Amazing job so far, I can't wait to read the other chapters you've posted!

I was going to wait until I reached the end of the posted chapters, but I just couldn't resist! This story is amazing! Your first story in this series was amazing! You've done a wonderful job & I can't wait to read the rest!

Wow! Excellent story! ‘‘This and the first1. Looking forward to reading the third installment of this epic journey, though I noticed you never finished it!? Regardless, I will read on, but be assured I will send another review hoping to prompt you to finish what you have started. After all, you owe it to yourself. Your reader fans and even to the fictional characters you so eloquently write!

Thankfully I didn't have to wait for installments just enough time to sit down and read all 18 chapters...fantastic story, looking forward to part III. Love the merging of John and the King...despite being AU, the characterizations are spot on, particularly for John, O'Neill, Lorne and Rodney...the OCs compliment the cast, making the story line plausible.

Great Job! Would love to see more stories...

You've ruined everything that made John Sheppard such a great character, gutted his personality and stick figured him into a dull, cardboard superhero. Thank you for the bad taste in my mouth.

I am very happy that John finally accepted his role as king. I'm also very happy that John and Teyla are going to get married. I just hope that Atlantis will be able to reestablish relations with earth on a somewhat basic terms.

A very good sequel. The story moved very quickly giving the feeling of John being overwhelmed by so many events and near death experiences.

Watching everyone, deny then accept that their world vision had to change because John had too, I could understand their fear and sadness. Their universe will have to expand and probably loose even more touch with their commander and friend. It is a goodbye in some ways.

I am on to the next story in the series. At this moment I hope the author completes the series. It is well done.

I have no words to express such a master piece. You are wonderful. Your idea is absolutely out of this world. Congratulations for the talent. When I am reading, I can actually picture everything that is going on. The face John does when he is mad, frustrate, sad, happy, embarrassed… thank you so much. The angst, the physically whump and the best of all the mental whump. Oh poor boy. Sometimes I feel sorry for such a weight to his shoulders. I read part 1 last week (and went crazy about it. I could not stop reading) , and run to read part2 and now I am delightful there is a part 3 in progress. WONDERFUL. I am really impressed about the good and evil philosophy we have here. It made me cry so many times when reading! I confess I have no idea how I didn’t find your stories before. But, well, at least now, I have another version of SGA that could have gone differently. It is completely possible. The ancients stories, the team work, the IOA pain in the ass, and even Woosly! I loved. I simply adored all the quest and trials for our King. The loss of memory was great. I loved the King, even missing John and feeling sorry for his team. But when John is back, we can feel the happiness in his eyes. Seriously, I have never read such a material that made me to see the scenes. Your style of description is perfect. And Sheyla…so sweet the way you created. I imagine that things for Sheppard got different in this parallel universe from season 2. I only miss Michael, but who knows what more great ideas you have on this genius mind of yours. Please continue. I will read you forever! I hope you can write professionally one day. Because I tell you girl, you got talent. A gift. You have the power .

Loved this second installment! Poor John, always getting whumped, physically and emotionally. I liked the more self-assured King John..I could still feel the John Sheppard-ness but more confidence. I kind of understand why everyone was afraid of John's powers, but knowing John and his extreme sense of justice and duty-I dont think they ever should have doubted him, especially Rodney! I find my fav team dynamics essential to any SGA story, so I found the disharmony disturbing, but now all is well-yea! My fave parts are my images of John in his regal Kingly attire-and OH MY-what images ey are! LOL! Love everyone adoring my hero! Now John is whole, the bad IOA gone, lets get those damn Wraith!

OMG! This is great I can't wait to read more. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, i may have to reread the 1st 2 parts because they're so good! Looking forward to more!

This story is so great! I'm working on reading this over spring break and finding it hard to do anything other than read this amazingly great story! I can't wait to find out what happens. Please Keep writing I enjoy this story a great deal.

For some reason, I have missed this wonderful series.

Thank you SO MUCH for all your John and Teyla moments. I just ADORE these two.

Please don't give up on this. It's beautiful and I've always seen John as more than just having an Ancient Gene.

I would love for you to use Teyla more. She's so a wonderful strength for John, but she's so much more.

I can't wait to read the wedding and how they fight alongside each other with strength, purpose and much love.

Thank you so much. A keeper for many cold nights to come.

what to say ..loved it..I am hooked...it really enthralled me..and have to say love love the sheyla...and now I can go read the start of part three...so looking forward to it

thanks so much for sharing your wonderful creative talent with us..

many hugs