Hmm... I love both TWEWY and Death Note, so this story has definitely caught my eye. The beginning was a bit confusing, because you made Joshua have Near's toys. I can't wait for the next chapter. 8D

Only advice I can give is working on character personalities, I guess. 3

Pretty interesting.

Whoo! A crossover of my favorite game AND anime! *overwhelmed*

This should turn out well. I'm excited...and shaking. XD Update soon? I can't wait to see how this will play out.

~Miura