The chaeacter development was great! I love the keisuke in this story very well made i did kinda always saw him obsessive exagerated friend hehehe so it makes perfect sense his thoughts i mean. Jeez really which youve continue or write another. I really enjoy reading your writing style. Also a bit more... lemonly... and plus a bit more for this pairing. Hopeing but doubting

Wow...just wow. That's all I can manage to say.

I haven't played the game-because, sadly, I live in America and go to college so I have no money to import it-but I did watch all 12 episodes of the anime and loved it.

This fic is just...amazing. You wrote it very well and the fact that you managed to capture the characters perfectly made this fic perfect! Good job! XD

I don't think I've ever loved reading a fic as much as this. Your writing style is just great, I couldn't stop reading! The humor also got me giggling like mad a couple of times; you just worded it all so well.

I loved this so very, very much. 3

That was so adorable!

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definitely awesome work,T-T...i've read it three 's hard to find any togainu no chi fics,especially keisuke/akira this one seems so right!i like your way of narrating and developing sensations.

more stories on keisuke and akira,plz~~~

I love this so damned much. I dont EVER read long fanfictions, even if their one shots (Im a lazy bum) but I read this word for word, from beggining to the goddamn end! This is my favorite togainu no chi pairing, I absolutely hate shikiXakira -_- Its so overused its just -_-

Anyways, YOU ROCK.

:)

Ah, this story put the biggest smile on my face. You portrayed the lovestruck sweetheart and nervous wreck that Keisuke really is. Both of them were completely in character to me, and the series of events and flashbacks flowed together really well. Nicely written.

THAT WAS WONDERFUL. *O*

I wasn't really a fan of Keisuke in the game (he was kinda like a mosquito that I wanted to swat away or smush with my thumb), but this really brings out the darling side that kept me from hating him completely. He's so in love, gah, it's just adorable~!

I have a feeling you hear this a lot, but the buildup of sexual tension was absolutely ace. Really made the final scenes shine and feel like sweet victory! Haha.

The way you wrote Akira was quite satisfying, as well. I love him to tiny pieces, but he can be such a lump of clay sometimes. This was good, though. He was a lump of clay to be proud of. XD

And nya, I can dote upon this forever, but just know that I love it and I'm glad you wrote it.

This is AWESOME like really really great work I can TOTALLY see the characters acting and behaving just like that I even DREAMED of them after reading ur fic *blushing*

Where can I find more of KeisukexAkira fanfics? I'm so addicted by now they're my absolutely fav couple in this game, I always had a soft spot for boys befriended since their young and innocent ages and then after growing up discovering their not-so-innocent feelings for each other XD

I never played the game (only read the manga), but I still managed to somewhat get what was going on.

Nicely done.

P.S. One more character added to the list of characters I'd never let anywhere near the kitchen. This makes six total.

Wow, this is the best Keisuke/Akira fic I've read, just a few of them somewhere. I love your details.

I'm getting sick with Shiki/Akira here.

I wonder why there's not much fic about this couple...

They rock too..

Akira sounds like such a difficult character to write, but somehow you characterize him flawlessly~

your flashbacks are always perfect, and they're probably one of my favorite things when it comes to your fics. i love them. ;_;

i loved the bit with the fruit salad. and i feel so bad for Keisuke, all those years with Akira nearby and no action must have been horrible, LOL;;

Oh man, if it's not hard enough to find a TnC fanfic on the web, it's even harder to find a well-written one. But I do think this takes the cake. You seem to know the characters well and are able to develop the story as... well, how it probably would be (if that makes much sense). :D

This was excellent, and I have to agree with the whole idea that Akira would develop interest if he was given the chance. The way you wrote Keisuke was so perfect. It's so rare to find Togainu no Chi fiction with this pairing, and especially one as well written as yours was. Absolutely fantastic!

Wow, so awesome. My favorite pairing, I absoloutly loved it.

I hate that it's so hard to find any togainu no chi Fics, I found like 5 of them in total xP And then most of them are Akira \ Shiki

Anyways, I think you did a good job, and that you should write some more Keisuke \ Akira Fics, because it's a hot pairing and there definitly isn't enough of it. Haha, keep up the good work!