...huh. I think I'd rather have the rest of the story with all its unrevised-ness rather than have it just abruptly cut off here like this...

This was a good chapter. I liked the set up here at the end for the next story and it was amazing to me how you managed to keep Kaiba so in character but still have your own twist when he can still turn away from Katsuye! I love the way that Yami and Yugi are definitely in a weird sort of relationship now but will that mean you may have to change some things in Dragontamers 4? Like the scene when Yami and Katsuye are taking their trip around Domino before Battle City starts?
I really love this story and I hope you can update soon?!

You already know that I think this chapter's awesome, but I just have to say it again! This chapter was awesome! I liked the little kiss scene at the end though, who ever knew Yugi would be that daring? I really haven't got a bad thing to say about this, please update soon?!

what the hell happened to this chapter?

Nice chapter! The way Otogi made Kaiba jealous over Jou was fantastic! And the last part with Bakura at the end was cool. Could you really be making Kaiba FRIENDS with Yugi's group? I like the idea.
I can't wait for your next update!
But what was with the weird p class "MsoNormal" at the beginning of each paragraph? And the /p and EMhave /EMan instead of have an?

please please please update this story i love this story

Great chapter! I think it was awesome how you kinda made Kaiba a little perverted thinking about Jounouchi, and her dress at the end sounded beautiful. I actually think I'm a bit jealous. I liked the behind the scenes plot with Varon and Layla, I think I see the wrench in the works.
I look forward to the next chapter, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!

So awesome. Thanks for updating this, I think some time soon I'm going to be reading the 'Mokuba hit puberty' part. This was good as it's always nice to see how authors write meetings between Yugi and Yami. I liked how they seperated in this world it was clever. I am glad that Mokuba has formed such an attachment to Katsuye, it's gotta bring Seto and her closer together at some point right? It was also good of you to include Honda's family, that was interesting to read. If you need a Beta Reader for anything, I officially qualify, so if you need help you have a backup plan if need be. Please can you talk to me about it?
I love these stories, thanks again for updating!

please update asap

While I do like this chapter, the rest of the story seems to have been taken down. Please could you put it back up? Last time I really liked the Mokuba hitting puberty part and I liked the scene where Kaiba told the people from the hospital to help Jounouchi first. Please please please put it back up?!

I read the other stories, and I simply loved it. Awesome portrayal of ALL the characters. I hope this will get updated soon. :D

Great first chapter. I like this story and I liked the first two also. Please update more chapters soon.

Ha! That was amusing. Glad to see you've updated this story arc. Hope to see more soon! )