Oh my gosh, that last few paragraphs were so dang sad. I literally started to cry when Jasper started to Pray. I felt his pain at the possibility of losing a loved one. I did the same thing when my dad found out he had Cancer. I prayed and prayed, pleading with the Lord to please not let my daddy die, pleading with him to not take him away from me. But we dont always get what we want and my dad passed away.

I havmt read the next chapter to see what happens but I am relating to Jasper sp nich right now it's crazy.

I guess if the baby daddy stuck around this wouldn't have she got knocked up by a vampire and had a normal pregnancy and the babies are growing normally? so they won't be hybrids i gather? now that Vicky has done her dirty work what is going to happen with Bella and her family? hopefully once she goes through the change she will kill Vicky due to her new born abilities.

I wonder how Jasper felt when you called him Edward while he was fucking you? will he be showing up again? as long as this story is i imagine he will at sometime.

Wow keep up the good work

Not really smart to write that down. What if someone snoops and reads it.

Each chapter just becomes more and more outrageous.

:) Thanks for sharing.

Amazing! I really enjoy reading this story!

Loved it! I really don't like the Volturi!

Stupid Jasper!

Awesome!

Yikes!

Now they know!

Uh-oh! Why did the Volturi summon them?

Fabulous!