awwww!
this was sooo sweet yet sooo sad
i cried soooo much while reading this
i also like the way you structured it
you did a great job :D

This is an amazing story. I love it. I cry through all seven chapters every time I read it. This story hits home more now than every before. Over the summer I lost a cousin who was in the military so this story reminded me of the weeks right after his death. Thank you for writing this story. It helps me to release my emotions when things become too much to handle.

Tan triste que cada capítulo me hizo llorar. Felicidades es una historia muy bonita.

wow did not think it was going to be so sad, boy got a few tears, have just joined this site that's why I am 4 years behind,

Kinda sad but that's the point. Death sucks your story didn't. Thanks for writing a well thought out story.

wow that was so sad. i got tears all over my mouse pad. LOL

good job :)

aww i cried through that whole story

it was so good

one of my favourites

aw! I cried ALL the way through that! But it was happy and sad tears. Very well written, shame it was so sad but... it was good anyway.

omg! i was literly crying when i read this...great story though.

:D

Ok so I pretty much cried through this whole story. I love how you broke it up going back and forth in time. The way you kept Tony a part of the whole story even if he was gone. Well worth reading even if it is about one of the sadest stories I have ever read.

Beautiful and heart-breaking. Very well written! I loved it!

Once again 2 lazy 2 log in.

LOVED this part:

Her face grew serious for a moment. "Tony, please do not make jokes about not marrying me again. I did not like it."

"You didn't like it?" he asked. "How do you think I felt when you said we wouldn't get married?"

She answered him with a kiss.

SO ADORABLE! :) AH! You gotta love TIVA! :)

xo

Bri :)

I literally cant stop crying, Gen. It's absoutly beautiful and SO Freakin' sad! I espically loved and hated the part, when Ziva said of keeping Tony's things, "One of your shirts even though I cant smell you on any of them now." SO S-A-D! WOW. This story is NEVER EVER EVER going to be removed from my favorites list! EXCELLENT JOB! :)

xo,

Bri :)

omg i loved chapter 3

"Dont eat my pancakes daddy."

SO FREAKIN ADORABLE! :) This story was just added 2 my favorites list. I read it every day now. EXCELLENT JOB GEN! :)

What is wrong with me? I was crying so hard while reading this that is a miracle that nobody came to check on me and to see if I was ok!

That was so sad and so well written. It took me like two hours to get to chapter 5! It was that good!

Love

Neko 3