...WOW... One amazing story that has become one of my favorites :3 Keep up the good work!

Right when I started reading Commoveo, I was eating popcorn (like, in your author's note? "makes popcorn"? Yeah, real good timing) XD

Ohmygoodness that was an amazing story. I really liked reading it in Seifers POV. Loved all of it really there was nothing I didn't like about it. The ending was very cute indeed.

ARGHHH this was amazing! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! Welp, I love all well-written Seiner fics but this one had such a unique plot that was so canon and cool! Seifer and Hayner were completely IC, which is what I'm super picky about in FANfiction so that pleased me mightily! :3

I loved how you integrated so many characters (And it had a lot of CID YAY!), it made the story feel like an awesome, disorganized mess that was super fun to read! The slowly forming friendship and then budding romance between Siefer and Hayner felt so natural and un-rushed for such a fast-paced, action-packed adventure! I APPLAUD YOU FOR BEING ABLE TO DO THAT. The relationship didn't feel rushed at all and it was adorable! :D

Over I'd day this is one of the best KH fanfics I've read in awhile and infinitely better because it's a Seiner Fic and they are one of my fav OTP's ;D Also WOWOW the whole RenexSora threw me off! I can totally see a little one shot all about that! ITS SO COOL how you merged Axel and Roxy to them to make ALL four of them happy ;D I don't know if Riku is angry because he's JELLY of Rene and likes Sora himself or if he's just genuinely shocked that SoraxKairi won't happen! XD

FANFANFANFANFANFANFAN!

FANFANFANFANFAN!

oh. my. god. THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING! i think you should copyright this send it to square enix and make it another kingdome hearts game! do it! please?

well it won't be completely fufilling because disney is afraid of gayness but still the deep storylines, the emotion (fuu almost made me cry dammit!), and i like rene too he was a nice addition

but yeah anyway summary? not a story it was one of those games you would glady pay $60 or $70 dollars to play

'nuff said :D

you are a really goos author. i was upto five o clock this morning because i was so transfixed by this magnificent work of art. btw im a huge organization xiii fan and im so friggin happy theyre not dead!

Sincerly~

the amuetur speller

Kind of a late review, seeng as how you finished this in 2009... but I LOVE THIS FIC! and therefore had to review. It's well written, has an excellent plot, and the wonderfulness that is Seiner. Also, Axel/Roxas is yummy. :) Thank you.

holy crap...this story is so amazing...i almost cried, and I laughed, and squeed lol but the end...man, starting the last chappie, I almost had a heart attack because for a minute there, I thought everything was a dream. But anyway, truly awesome story! *hugs* :D

I think I love you (not in a creepy way) for that Veggie Tale reference! I Love my Lips is the best!:D

OH MY GOD, THIS WAS SO FUCKING EPIC. I FUCKING LOVE YOU FOR THIS. *w*

I loved Seifer's little personal touches, and threats lol. Great story, though I personally never saw Sora and Rene coming it makes sense looking back XD

Woah! Epic!

I love how you mixed in all the different universes -what a great plot!

o: I just dropped my mouth and clicked the review button as soon as I saw the Veggietales song. Yes please.

...okay, I'm going to stop fangirling about talking vegetables (or larry, in particular) and review for real so this isn't totally wasted.

I think that the story is moving slightly fast, or at least the plot about Hayner and Seifer and such is. Not so much the romance part (or I'm assuming). It felt a little like..."Hey Hallow Bastion! What Leon knows me? Oh God, Hayner is being eaten by heartless! What Hayner a heartless?" all within a couple paragraphs. It's obviously not as exaggerated as that, but that's the feeling I got. I do like the time skip in Traverse Town in this chapter. It was brief and detailed all at the same time.

I like how you portray Hayner and Seifer (though the occasional Pokemon-esque 'friendship' speech is slightly off, but I kind of have an adversion to those in the first place so there probably aren't as many as I'm making up in my head). Cid's amusing.

The whole 'my dad's a drunk and will kill me if I'm gay' angst is slightly cliché, but you give reasons other than just being gay-being an artist- and that lessens the cliché. I also like how Seifer isn't angsting about being gay, just about his father's opinion. That's a pleasant change of scenery. Though I'll admit that the standard assumption that since these are characters and this is a fanfiction, the author doesn't have to describe them bugs me a little, I love that no one (especially Hayner, the love interest) is described in flowery prose. It's kind of a "there, in your face" and it just seems so Seifer-like.

Your grammar and spelling are alright. It's simple and clean. (That's...almost a pun. xD) I think I noticed a 'your/you're' mistake somewhere back but I think I read that you're editing this, so you'll probably catch it.

Okay, enough of the criticism and onto the nice word and happy reader-ness. The story is interesting. There are several twists and turns that I wasn't expecting and the plot draws my attention in. I can't wait to read the rest of the chapters.

Normally I'd add in some inquiries and predictions, but the story's complete so it feels kind of redundant. xD Hopefully I didn't offend you or anything. Sometimes I get a little bit of an angry tone in my voice (type-y-ness?) after basketball practice, which I just came out of. xD

On another note...I think this is seriously the longest review I've written in...at least a year.