| Reviews for Never Far Behind |
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AJTHORN chapter 33 . 9/9/2019 I really enjoyed this story and the sequel. Please write more xx |
Nekokitten1123 chapter 47 . 7/19/2009 I loved the story. |
foxee-chik chapter 47 . 10/9/2008 well done 4 writing such a good story! i cant w8 2 read the sequel! i liked the entire fic and i'm glad tht mr thomson realises tht evie wasn't as spoiled as he believed. |
lissysue85 chapter 47 . 10/9/2008 Ah what a great ending. I'm so glad she got her diploma. This was a wonderful story honey and you're a good writer. It was a lovely mix of action and fluff. Good luck with the sequel, I look forward to reading it. |
Gilian 101 chapter 47 . 10/8/2008 Hey pal! This was one great fic, dude. I loved every word of it. And, furthermore, I adored that moment when Alan had a nightmare back in chapter 45. Scitt's brotherky concern was so sweet and just perfect. Good thing I have a sweet tooth, huh? Jk. I loved the ending, too. The story began with us being introduced to Evie's character, a teenager barely capable of keeping herself in good health due to the stress she felt over the examinations. But now, at the very end, she's a whole new person. I think it's because she knows that she has the love and support of her family to back her up. And now she and Alan are Thunderbirds. Super! I'll look out for your future stories. I hope they'll be as good as this one. Just as a tip, though, and DO NOT take this as harsh criticism, - or indeed criticism of any kind - but you may want to do your next story with less frequent updates but much longer chapters. If you update, say, once every two days instead of twuce a day, you can combine the four chapter's worth of info into just one chapter. Most readers prefer to read longer chapters than have frequent updates, as it allows us to get into the story a little more. Again, I am not saying that you are doing anything wrong. I loved this story. The only thing I had problems with was the fact that you updated so frequently that I could never review in time. Being a psychologist, I have odd working hours so I often don't have enough time to go on the Internet once I'm home. Anyway, off the point there. The point is that this was a great fic, just like your other reviewers have said. I can't wait to read more. Peace out. |
Little Miss Bump chapter 47 . 10/8/2008 Great chapter, pal. Evie got her diploma, and her Daddy is the proudest man on the planet. Plus, Evie and Alan are clearly fully inolved in IR, and I'm positive that they're doing a fantastic job. I loved the ending, it jus seemed fitting after what's happened in the rest of this fic. Well done! A wonderful ending to an equally wonderful story. Your frequent updates and light, easy-going plotline has made this a very enjoyable piece of writing. A sequal? Really? Awesome! I will definitely keep an eye out for that. Thank you for writing such an excellent story, my friend. Many thanks indeed. Well done. |
sweet.and.sour888 chapter 47 . 10/8/2008 Aw! It's over! Oh well... At least there's gonna be a sequel! I can't wait till it's up. It better be soon! A month is too long...but maybe I can wait that long. I loved this story! Definately my favorite sister fic ever! Thanks for writing it! Pinkyy |
writtenwarning chapter 47 . 10/8/2008 AWESOME!I CANT BELIVE I DIDNT opps caps lol i cant belive i didnt get a chance to review the chap before! DAMN TIME DIFFRENCE! anyways AWESOME! cant wait 4 the sequel! luv ya loads ash x |
ShikaKibaShinoGal chapter 46 . 10/8/2008 Mr. Thomson isn't evil after all. |
Little Miss Bump chapter 46 . 10/8/2008 Aaw! Okay, I like Mr. Thomson now. He may still be a little gruff, but he's very grateful and is willing to wipe the slate clean with Evie. And I have a feeling that Evie will be able to pay better attention in class now that she doesn't have to avoid antagonising Thomson. *sigh* Everything's just fine. Another great chapter, buddy! I look forward, as always, to reading the next one. Laters! |
lissysue85 chapter 46 . 10/8/2008 So the teacher has a heart then and she passed her midterm too so its all good. I loved the bit where she went back and hugged her dad that was so cute. Great chapter honey |
foxee-chik chapter 45 . 10/8/2008 i'm likin it! i love the twist tht u came up wiv and i cabt w8 2 read the rest. i hope mr thomson treats evie a lot better in class now tht he recognises her voice and i cant w8 2 find out wot he says 2 her the nxt time he sees her. |
lissysue85 chapter 45 . 10/8/2008 Aw that was so sweet. I loved it. Trust Virgil to want to paint them. I love Scott's protectiveness. My big brother is so like him. Fantastic chapter honey keep it up. |
Little Miss Bump chapter 45 . 10/7/2008 Aww! Okay, that was THE best chapter so far. I'm serious. I love brotherly fluff, and this was exactly what I've been waiting for. Well done! It was so sweet when Scott was cuddling him on his lap, even though he's a teen and would usually cringe at such an idea. That was cute. And it was perfectly understandable, too. I mean, after all that's happened, the poor kid was bound to break again after another nightmare. Very realistic. And so wonderfully fluffy, too! Lol, I loved the bit when Evie said "Blackmail them and I'll slap you from here to Boston, Gordon." That was funny! And when Gordo then tried to feign innocence afterwards, but Evie wasn't buying any of it. Hee hee, family fluff rules. Another great chapter, pal! Excellent work! I can't wait for the next installment! Love ya! |
writtenwarning chapter 45 . 10/7/2008 . ! i swear on my life that as soon as i saw you had written that alan had a nightmare in this chapter i ran out into my kitchen dancing and i even did the worm i swear - i was just so excited! and i gotta tell ya...IT WAS AWESOME! i LOVED it cant wait for the next installment! BOOYAH! luv ya loads ash x |