I am glad you updated even if it was such a little chapter. So how will Litrell react when next he sees Dray? And what will Dray's plans be when she wakes up? Because she is not going to take giving up her plans to design and control her own wraith ship custom designed by her. I think she will wake up in a good mood despite what happened and in an absolute frenzy. I can't wait to see if her grandmothers ZPM is still where she expect and if she can get her hands on it. Will she ask for anyone's help during all of designing and building process? And I also want the hive to run in to other characters the people of Atlantis have run into.

I hope that you are still planning on updating this story. Its just been such a long time since you've updated that I am starting to worry if you ever will. Come on I want to see Ina and Joot run naked in Atlantis.

I can't wait for you to update this story again. I want to know if Dray manages to get her hand on her Grandmothers ZPM? Would this hive welcome Todd or Micheal to there hive?

Will these blue creatures be a threat to humans or just wraith? What are they called? How do they track wraith? How intelligent are they?

I am curious in what season of Atlantis this is taking place. Will the people living on Atlantis have heard of a hive that has gone Renegade before they meet? Can't wait for another chapter.

Very interesting story, with many fascinating characters! Please, go on!:)

This was a little hard to read with you jumping back and forth to what the different wraith were doing. Dray seems to have been abused and will refuse to take orders from another because she I think sees that as submission. I see Dray does not want to be Queen but is more interested in building the best ship she can. I can also see Fenzey getting all excited if he were told Atlantis has its own green house with different plants teams have collected for Dr Brown. I think she is one human he wouldn't mind talking and working with. I can also see the two little ones deciding to take off there clothes and run naked though Atlantis without a care. I can see the humans laughing and the wraith bowing there head and slapping their hand to the forehead. Hope to read more again soon.

Wow, this is just sheer awesomeness. I love the Wraith more than anything and I love your vision of Wraith society-particularly the fact that the renegades are so young. Wraith development has always intrigued me and sadly it's not a topic covered much in the actual show nor in fanfic. So kudos there!

The characters you've created are fascinating and I already love them, especially the two kids. :D I personally don't believe Wraith have individual names, but I undestand it's necessary to give them names to tell them apart in a story like this...I'm not quite sure I'm fond of all the names, but I do love all your characters. They already have very distinct personalities and desires, are very well written. The pairings are well done too, and I'm speaking as someone who isn't inordinately fond of romance.

In any event-can't wait to see more! Is the renegade hive going to encounter Atlantis (I hope so)? Keep up the good work! :D

Cool story! I so love the Wraith! Will there be another chapter? I'd really like to know how this continues...:-)

greetz: Wraith Fan -x-

What a good start! i love the pairings you have made and their interactions. At first I was worried about the same sex pairings but you have done it with good taste and given depth to the individuals. It is very different form other fanfic iv read so far. I cant wait to see where you take this.

Interesting start. A very individualistic bunch for a Hive but that should make them flexible enough to deal with a changing galaxy. Are you going to have them run into any of the regular characters? Sheppard, Ronan, Michael, Todd?

I hope to read more of this story. Will they elect a Queen or will they all decide on what to do together? I wonder what the first obstacle will consist of. Will it be another Hive? The people living on Atlantis? Or Micheal? How often must a Wraith feed to be healthy? Are all the Wraith except the two little ones able to feed? When will they run into the people from Earth? Will they become enemy or allies?

OMG, this is an awesome fic. You simply must allow me to add it to "The Wraith Archives", the C2. This would make an astounding contribution to the Hive...lol :D

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