| Reviews for Rip Out The Wings |
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   miguel.puentedejesus chapter 11 . 7/1 Fantástico! Simplemente Encantador |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 10 . 7/1 Encantador! De Verdad Maravilloso |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 9 . 7/1 Encantador! Perfecto |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 8 . 7/1 Perfecto ! Maravilloso |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 7 . 7/1 Encantador! Perfecto, |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 6 . 7/1 Encantador! Un Poco Rápido, Pero Fantástico! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 5 . 7/1 Fuc#! Sinceramente Me Tomo Por Sorpresa! Perfecto! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 4 . 7/1 Encantador! Perfecto! |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 3 . 7/1 Exquisito. De Verdad Perfecto |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 2 . 7/1 Fantástico! Perfecto! De Verdad Perfecto |
| miguel.puentedejesus chapter 1 . 7/1 Fantástico! Un Maravilloso Comienzo! Perfecto |
| ClaireR89 chapter 4 . 5/17/2018 Explanation is terrible at the end |
| automaton14 chapter 8 . 5/17/2018 "sire"? Ugh. Mpreg is already dumb, this just doubles the dumb. More importantly, your writing doesn't flow as well as it could. It reads jerky and clunky and not like real people are talking. That's an area you can improve upon. I like the plot, I like a lot less that as soon as riddle gets her back, she's expected to be a soldier in his war. That's... Disgusting and makes me hate riddle and Snape. Whatever. Your story, you do you. |
| FemaleFoxyFTW-2 chapter 12 . 3/26/2018 Regarding your A/N at the beginning of the chapter I have one thing to say. Stick it to the idiots. |
| Skull chapter 30 . 12/26/2017 Grate work. Please to pick this back up |
