you so need to finish this story you are doing an amazing job on it so update soon

love the story

Can't wait to read more. I hope you haven't given up. I love this story so much.

I absolutely love it

can't wait for the next chapter

I liked it a lot. However I hope dean won't be in the story much longer he's icky. I am stoked for you next chapter!

This is a good story. I really like how Lorelai was very accepting. I also liked Jess in this story how he actually opened up to Luke. My guess is that Dean is at the door.

please tell me it isn't Dean!

is it dean? good chapter and more please

Read all three chapters before reviewing, makes it sort of easier... I think. :D

Okey, so you've got a seriously brilliant plot going on here, man, if only this had happened in the series I would've jumped for joy. You show a side of Jess that we all know he has, and you show a side of Dean that he probably has, so good job there!

I like how you keep shifting points of view, makes it more nuanced and you get a fuller picture of everything.

Keep the chapters coming, I know I'll read them! :)

i would have to go with Dean but it could be Tristin you never know. but ill say Dean.

ps: i never did like Dean. but Jess and Tristin were the two that i did like. Logan was just like Tristin but yet not at all like him.

Jesseca

i already know whos at the door (dean) but i just want ot say this was a great chapter.

good chapter & more please

Really good chapter. i think Dean is at the door. Please update soon.

I can't believe continue,who was at the door I think it's dean.