That was good.
And what did you mean with that you not good in english anyway?

U are seem to be trying so try harder but this is a nice story it attracted me

THIS WAS SO ADORABLE!thank you for writing this!

wow will natsume propose to mikan

OMG!

the plot is nice though its the grammar Im not so crazy about but anyways, i know that youre a foreigner and I dont think you know english that well so ill take that as an exception! good luck on ur stories!

I really L.O.V.E it!mwahahaha

aww this was so kawaii actually ur actually better then someof the peoples here becuz they type fast and misslpell but i didnt see any in yours anyway sgood story C:

S-WE-E-T

Hahhahahah...kelakarnya...loved it,update soon :)

kau tiru aku punya sikit,jangan tiru aku aku tak tiru kau .tapi nice story and betul grammar faham minah and kalau kau cakap whatever ke apa apa ke lantak lah lol

I luv the is a very good plot. i did see some grammatical errors but for someone whos not very good at english you did a good job. I also liked it that you made it like a scipt. i know some people don't like it that way but i kinda enjoyed it! keep up the good work!

KAWAII! NATSUMIKAN!

hmm... I think this would be even more appealing to readers if you wrote it in paragraph form instead of script... oh, and capitalization and spacing and grammar, yeah... ara? you're having trouble with english? want some help? I'd love to help you in english so that you can improve your stories! the plot and the idea is great by the way! :D oh, and another thing, please don't hesitate to PM me, ne? I'll be waiting for your PM! ganbatte with your stories!

~*BlackRain105

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