So dark, I wonder who that woman was aiming for when she cursed the deceptions. I can only think that ALL the humans that each deception has killed will come to haunt them one day...and break them...so very slowly. They would regret EVER laughing at the curse that woman put such suffering to them. Muahah, such darkness, even though it is only a one shot. Loved it.

nice little ghost story

can you continue this, because I want to know what happens next!

Chilling, creepy and lovely. This is the sort of fic I love. A small, uncanny package.
Thank you!

Awesome ghost story it would be great to see what would happen to skywarp and the anther decepticons can you continue this story please

this sent shivers down my spine.

Okay, way to totally break a Decepticon without making him a wuss. Psyche-out for the win!

Whoo! -cold chill- Have you ever heard a song called Zombie Dance by Escape the Fate? you should hear it, wow, this was dark and just plain awesome, scary too! like the ring or something! I loved it!

As a fan of good ghost stories and horror, I can't tell you how much I adore this story. :) I can't tell you how nice it is to find such a well done supernatural story, makes me sad that it is only a one-shot.

First off, I thank you for choosing Thundercracker. I don't think any other Con would have the emotional impact as he did with the ghosts, which makes since why they would have targeted him even if they weren't aware of their termination.

Speaking of ghosts, well done with their personas - they were just the right amount of creepy! :)

Emotional, well-written, believable and just plain wonderful - thanks for the awesome read! :)

~Alaskan Olive

Extremely creepy. I'd say the curse worked well, and I like the loop created.

This... was...

AWESOME!

I love the idea of Thundercracker being haunted by the ones he killed, going mad, and eventually turning on his own faction. But I fell even more in love with this story when it passed on to Skywarp. It makes me wonder what would happen if Starscream got it. He'd probably try and shoot at them all.

creepy. I like it a lot, keep writing.

Woah, that was freaky, in a good way of course. Nicely written.

Very creepy-I liked it a lot!

That was SO creepy! *shivers*

Really well written (as always), and I loved the perspective of others around TC (poor Red; always so paranoid).

The ending was pure win: the Decepticon army defeated by ghosts!