Reviews for Failing Twilight
christianthevabalasi chapter 14 . 6/28/2019
Pls make more this is great!
Dragon of Winter chapter 12 . 11/13/2018
Whoops, my thing hit post before I could comment on a later chapter. I love this story, it's so amazing how you portray Naruto and the team, I can't wait to see what happens next. Is Naruto going to help them train? Is anything going to happen with wave again? I can't wait to find out!
Dragon of Winter chapter 14 . 11/13/2018
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Trickster79 chapter 14 . 1/17/2018
This work itself it's a tragedy. Why? 'Cause the study behind the plot, the descriptions, the writing style and the dynamics described are pure gold. But, unfortunately it's been abandoned and so, I won't be seeing much more of this MASTERPIECE. Truthly, it's a real shame. I will still be waiting for a miracle to happen in case someday, this work returns to life. I still would love to see the Chunnin exams Arc with Gaara, Karin, Yuugito, Kabuto and Orochimaru.
shadow chapter 14 . 8/20/2017
I liked the chapter!
KaKashi's Okami chapter 14 . 8/12/2017
I do hope you have not abandoned it permanently. It's a good story; if so I hope someone picks up the mantle and gives us a proper closing.
moodysavage chapter 14 . 4/26/2017
Reread this again...still a great story. Any thought to posting your story notes?
moodysavage chapter 14 . 1/8/2017
An awesome and solid story. Abandoned. Have you considered posting the 8 pgs. of notes? For closure?
The Good Child chapter 14 . 3/12/2016
Even thou this story is abandoned i still love it.
Facts chapter 5 . 2/8/2016
Exuse me, but Madara died a decade before the Uchiha massacre, and the one posing as him is Obito Uchiha, who was saved by Madara and tried to activate the moons eye plan.
hga chapter 7 . 12/20/2015
I can guess why you abandoned it, but this is not a *bad* story, certainly has fun stuff to keep one's interest.

But I have to protest at the all too common trope of Naruto calling Tsunade "baa-chan" when she hadn't given him a reason to insult her, even know that she's that old, or be as familiar with her as he was with his surrogate grandfather.
Trixi chapter 14 . 11/21/2015
Thank you for writing this story! I love it and i am still rereading it regularly, even if it is abandoned.
Drew86419 chapter 13 . 11/20/2015
You need to stop with the stupid accent. They aren't western people, every single person in the Naruto universe are Asian, and in an entirely Asian land. That guy he was friends with is acceptable with an accent cause you made it seem like he was slurring like a drunk. Nobody else has ever had an accent like a western one in the actual Naruto verse, at least the ORIGINAL Japanese version didn't. I don't know what the dumb American dub has in it and frankly I don't care. It serves 0, you hear that, 0% of a purpose to any part of the story and you even gave a dumb reason as to why he has it. Who starts talking in a different accent than normal when they are angry? Not a singly person alive when it's there native language. So stop being a dumbass and quit using that aggravating accent.
Lumene chapter 14 . 10/7/2015
Aww, you didn't even make those scene's you promised... like chuuni exam, more Ibiki and Naruto's minions..
Shion Lee chapter 14 . 8/29/2015
It's really good u know so...uhm...continue please?
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