| Reviews for One Step At A Time |
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   Sweetheart102 chapter 33 . 2/8/2014 Awesome. |
| Miss-Margaux-Malfoy chapter 33 . 9/26/2013 I love love love this story. It is a very original idea. |
| Miss-Margaux-Malfoy chapter 15 . 9/23/2013 I really liked the story until now, but what song are they singing at the end? |
| Guest chapter 33 . 9/7/2012 I hope you make another story about them you are a great writer! |
| Fandomfangirlno1 chapter 16 . 11/29/2011 children of the moon? |
| Fandomfangirlno1 chapter 13 . 11/29/2011 wait! is maribel's brother a vampire now? |
| KiaraLovesTwilightForever chapter 1 . 10/10/2011 awwwwwesome chapter! |
| Kgntwt56 chapter 33 . 10/25/2010 Really amazing and original ending what is with the end and amazing endings well done |
| Isabelle19 chapter 1 . 8/29/2010 great |
| 10Years-Of-FRIENDS-In-2weeks chapter 1 . 6/15/2010 HI! I read this story a long time ago before i got an account and before figuring out how to work this thing! i have finaly had enough free time to actually look for this story and review. This story is amzing and it made me team Jessie! i love them and think they are such a cute couple! SAPPHIRE XXXXXX P.S. you will probably get an other review to forever and always about 3 minutes after this one so watch out! XXX |
| Audrey chapter 11 . 5/27/2010 November 22 is my birthday :D! Lol, ( Poor Jacob, poor Nessie ( |
| luv2beloved chapter 2 . 4/15/2010 URGH I still have this feeling that I have read this...But I also review just about every chapter while reading since no review for the chapter then maybe I din;t read |
| luv2beloved chapter 1 . 4/15/2010 The start sounds familiar not sure if I read already or not, so let me keep going. |
| Lilly chapter 33 . 2/19/2010 Dear ScarletRubie, I liked your story, it's pretty good. Just a few tips, you should keep in mind that spelling and grammar makes a huge difference in communicating a story. There were a lot of missed out words and often the wrong punctuation marks were used. One thing I noticed also is that at least twice you mixed up the names... :) Like in chapter 32 where Jacob's Halloween date comes to talk to them... her name is Ashley, but in chapter 32 you called her Allison. Anyway, if you pay a bit more attention to the accuracy of your writing, the story would be a lot better. You have a great imagination and I definitely hope my review helps you out! Do well! Eliza Kocken |
| stormdog11 chapter 1 . 2/12/2010 love it |
