| Reviews for Obvious |
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   annaharding chapter 6 . 4/23/2018 So sweet! |
| annaharding chapter 5 . 4/23/2018 Wise man! |
| annaharding chapter 4 . 4/23/2018 So sad for Jeb. So hard for him to understand and let go of his ideal hero. |
| annaharding chapter 3 . 4/23/2018 Loved this! |
| Commander Ray chapter 4 . 9/2/2014 Nicely done. No very many people think that Jeb might not like the idea of Cain and DG being together. That said, you did a flawless job. |
| tin-a-holic chapter 6 . 7/14/2014 Amazing! thanks soooooo much for sharing this little treasure with us all! |
| tin-a-holic chapter 4 . 7/14/2014 swoon! |
| tin-a-holic chapter 3 . 7/14/2014 I love this sooooo much! As you wish! perfect. I love these little glimpses. Nice work and thanks for sharing! |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/16/2013 I was just watching both those movies! Honesty they're both one on top of the other beside my bed! You make me laugh so much! Now I'm gonna go and read the rest of the story |
| Sabatha Rox chapter 6 . 8/12/2013 This was so awesome! I loved reading it and the idea of different viewpoints was unique. I wish there was more to it haha, but I will definitely read your other stories (: |
| Black Midnite chapter 6 . 4/23/2013 Dude! That was awesome! I especially love the chapter titles. |
| bsloths chapter 6 . 5/16/2010 What a sweet story! I loved all of the different points of view and everyone was nicely in character. Great job! |
| Helen chapter 6 . 3/9/2010 I just had to say - I really liked the names chosen for the chapters. I thought it was cute and clever. Not unlike the story itself. It's nice to read one that isn't so angsty. So thanks! |
| kransp chapter 6 . 8/24/2009 I just read this and I love it, it has a great flow. I especially love the first chapter. |
| JesSickUh chapter 6 . 7/16/2009 Loved this one. Especially this part: "Mother, please... watch them." Azkadellia begged, gesturing to the wide window that let in so much sunlight. Az ftw! |
