I want an up-date! (I sound like a two-year old..) pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaase?

AH! NO! NO! I demand an update! I demand it, with everything from nerd rage to I wanna know what Stan's gotta say and who Kyle's gonna end up with. Btw, Pop six swish nu-uh sisirol(sp) lipshitz. In chapter 9. Not sure if someone else said it but there it is!1 LOL Well, you'd better update this, or else!

This fanfiction is purely amazing! my little sister and I love it so much 3 the charaters are written so they stay true to there original south park charateristics yet fit the Mamma Mia! parts they are cast to portray aswell. I espiecally like how you wrote Ike,Filmore and Flora. She seems like a cutie who could pack a punch if need be. Kyle's reactions to the past boyfriends showing up on the island was priceless and Kenny putting poor Token in his place made me laugh so hard. The only thing that bothers me is I believe kindergarden goths real Name is Georgie.

sorry if the review was crummy, I'm super new.

my little sister pumpkin and I are part of an newly put together american cosplay group called Respect Our Authoritah! in washington state and we were hoping you would give us premission to make a mini seris/movie like project of this fanfiction. We'd stay true to the plot and lines completly and give you full screen credit aswell as post links to your account. Thanks for your time

:,( omg my fave part

sounds interesting

I'm sorry. I'm the imposter blaming Pillar Of Winter. Please feel free to insult me because I'm a no good douchebag.

I'm a little tea pot short and stout

Here is my handle here is my spout

When I get all worked up here me shout

Tip me over and pour me out

This was a failure

I'm making a note here

HUGE Mistake

It's hard to overstate my dissatisfaction

Aperture Science

We do what we must because we can

For the good of all of us

Except the ones who are dead

But there's no sense crying over every mistake

You just keep on trying till you run out of cake

And the science gets done and you make a neat gun

For the people who are still alive.

-

Dear Loser

-

I'm not even angry

I'm being so sincere right now

Even though you broke my heart and killed me

and tore me to pieces

and threw every piece into a fire

As it burned, it hurt because I was so happy for you

Now these points of data make a beautiful line

And we're out of beta, we're releasing on time

So i'm GLaD I got burned

Think of all the things we learned

For the people that are still alive.

Go ahead and leave me

I think I prefer to stay inside

Maybe you'll find someone else to help you

Maybe Black Mesa?

That was a joke

HA HA FAT CHANCE

Anyways, this cake is great, it's so delicious and moist

Look at me still talking, when there's science to do

When I look out there it makes me glad I'm not you

I've experiments to run, there is research to be done

On the people who are still alive.

And believe me I am still alive

I'm doing science and I'm still alive

I feel FANTASTIC and I'm still alive

While you are dying I'll be still alive

And when you're dead I will be still alive.

STILL ALIVE

STILL ALIVE

First off: Woah! Long chapter love ;D Second, welcome back. Nice to see you're updating this story again~

I can tell your writing style has changed immensely. There's a bit of Out-Of-Character tones seeping in, so you have to watch that. I think the main problem was how Token 'spoke'. Lastly, a small amount of spelling errors. That's all the big things that rubbed me the wrong way, though. As far as I can see, you're improving. As for the rest of the story, I found a lot of sentences I really liked (no matter how odd that sounds), such as "After blackening the pigment of his blood with pure caffeine..."

Also, it's great that you can somehow slip all the characters into a chapter, give them a plausible part, and make everything fit together somewhat nicely.

I sense more drama is on the way, yes? Splendiferous, hope you update soon! (:

BY THE WAY, KINDERGOTH'S REAL NAME IS GEORGIE. GO TO southpark./wiki/Kindergartners TO PROVE IT.

GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT PLEASE WRITE MORE!

Kyle scared me in this chapter O.o

A few things: Emotions are changing way too fast. It seems that people are having mood swings. I think this is because you've got so many potential story lines, but you're just moving too fast and clumping them together. Take your time and space things out, detail them! Things that seem like they would be a big deal are being shoved aside for something unrelated. ) I see many different scenes that could be expanded on! Your writing is good enough that I'm sure you would have no problem doing so!

Also: I loved the ending, however fast/slightly random it seemed.

I always have trouble with endings x) This one seemed to fit really well! Keep up the good work. I'm glad you haven't abandoned this x)

((Sorry for the long review. None of this was meant to offend, either. One last thing: Be sure to take notes on your ideas, so you don't have to rush D Good luck.))

This story is good; as was the movie! Intresting how someone managed to fit everything perfectly. :3

This chapter, I had to like... read five or six times just to get it. Then I was like, "Oh!" XD

The dream, dude. Epic. :D

:P I hate it when authors abandon stories with potential. It's no fun.

Nice job on the chapter! Full of emotion xD Keep on your tenses, though! ) Can't wait for the next installment - especially the whole Kyle and Christophe situation~